A Different Path (another poem)

It's a lonely path,

The Heatbroken wander;

It's a lonely world we see.

No matter the people,

Who try to make us smile--

They'd know the pain,

If they walked with us,

A while.

They'd know why tears,

Sting our eyes,

And why we cry,

And why,

For a while at least,

We just want to die.

But sometimes we are led,

Along a different path,

A brighter path,

And we get a glimpse of life,

As it was meant to be,

Beautiful,

Hopeful,

Alive.

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  • Miki Koishikawa
    January 20, 2008

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    I have been though this path many times and it never changes.It's always going to be there.I always think it's going to be there by my side. My Prince Charming is never going to come and kiss me.I will always be crying.