It was a great morning and the sun was shining. But for once Mud-Cake was in her bedroom...i think being a good girl. But she was at her desk grinning as she wrote up a poster of:
MUD-CAKE CAR WASH, DOG WALKING, BAKING CAKES, OR JUST MINDING THE HOUSE 1 POUND FOR ANY SMALL LITLE JOB!
She was saving up for a kite, a rubber cake, a pram, ballons, and a rubber duck for April fools day tomorrow! The focast for april 1st was a very windy day. AND...miss minx had a very nasty trick...she was up for her next door neibour's baby, Grinhol!
As soon as she was done, she taped it to the post outside the house. She stood back sat down and started calling : THE BEST WORK IN THE WHOLE WORLD! MISS MUFFIN I AM!!!!
In no time, minx had 3 dogs to walk and six handbags to mind. She was going to wear the hanbags while walking the dogs. But she had a better idea. Inside one of the handbags was 13 pounds! She let the dogs free and left the other handbags next to the sign and then blessed them and with an enourmous grin on her face, she ran to the Market.
April Fools day it was and Minx got up very early. first she was going to play a trick on Grinhol. She wondered over to the neibour's house and just caught Grinhol an dher mum getting into the car.
"Oh...Hello Mrs. Better!" minx called. "Where are you going?"
"Hi minx...i am going to get my hair cut and i have to take Grinhol!"
"Oh would you like me to look after her while you go?"
"Yes please...That would help! Here you go."
Mrs. Better handed over Grinhol and Grinhol farted!
"Sorry...NO FARTY Grinhol." "Oh that's ok." replied minx and ran to her bedroom opedned the window and put Grinhol in the pram.
Blew up the ballons and then tied the kite and the ballons to the pram! She looked out the window to see if anyone was there.
Nobody. Great! She lifted the pram over to the window and gave Grinhol a note to carry Saying : THE VERY SPECIAL FINDER OF THIS NOTE,PLEASE TO GRINHOL'S HOUSE AND RECIVE $1OOOOOOOOO DOLARS!
She let go of Grinhol and she floated up and up with force of the ballons! Minx Laughed and shouted : GOOD RIDDENCE!!!
Epilogue
Grinhol was spotted on the 12th of April and was sent back to her family reciving 1000 dollars. But Minx was grounded for 1 year.
A contest entry
- APRIL FOOLS! by DuchessAura of Brie.
350 points, ended April 26, 2007, 5 entries
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Comments
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This is very good, but there are a few spellings you need to change: neighbour, little, recieved. Also, don't start a new paragraph halfway through a sentence. I think you write well for your age, keep at it. Meggh xxxxxxxxxxxx
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yeah its ok
Not bad but you are a strange girl
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Great
Pretty funny
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Thanks for entering! I saw a few spelling mistakes you might want to fix. Basically I suggest going through this and editing and adding details. Kinda evil for an April Fool's Day joke, but it works. I think it could be a really good story if you work out the few kinks in it.
good luck!
~Aurora~
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