oh lord!
oh lord!
what can i do.
what should i do.
what would you do.
i'm in love!
lord i just can't help it
like i lost all control
oh lord!
oh lord!
lord i met her just the other day
i was walking dow this o'l street
and she was walking the other way
i saw her face
and she saw mine
oh lord!
oh lord!
and it was over like that
i felt cupids arrow strike me
from behind
and now lord i'm in love
what will i do
oh lord!
oh lord!
send me a angel
or send me a miracal
i don't care lord
just help me find her again
oh lord!
oh lord!
if i can't find her
i might just die
lord help me in my struggle
or i may die
Author notes
12 bars blues song witch means for thoughs who are drawing a blank you strech out thw rods a little in a blues tempo...smooth,slow,mellow,soulfull
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i did like this to good job i really did enjoy reading this maybe you can make your i's big tho but this was a very good picec of work good job and good bless to you
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I really really like this. I don't particularily like it that you didn't capitalise your I's, but it's okay. this reminds me of a really old poem that I read once that I can't remember the name of...
Anyways! Good job.
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I really like this. I love the sort of desperation to find her again in the end, the apparent physical need (hence the dying if said woman is never found). Awesome!
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