Well I wrote a story called 'crazy night'Well my friends aunt Is thinking I killed her in it cause her name was sarah to.So Here I am really writing one to kill her and cindy.
Okay moving on...
To the story....
There once was this old lady named sarah that everyone did not like because she had a bunch of cats and she threw rocks at the kids that would walk past her house.And she also has this neince cindy that everyone just loved ya(ya right not me)she was mean to.
It was like they would put spell's on people to get them to like you.So one day I was walking down the road and sarah said hey you miss little thing come over here for a mintute."she said pointing her finger at me"I just looked at her and said umm ya let me think no.So I ran away really fast them all of a sudden Iran right in to cindy.Oh god I thought to myself this is all I need.
So cindy took me back to that creepy old lady's house and I just remeber I had my pocket knife on me.
So I looked at cindy and said put me down she said no hell no you brat...So I stabed her and I kept doing it over and over again till I fell to the ground..
Then I ran up to sarah and said throw one more rock you old lady thing..So of corse she did so I ran up to her a stabed her in the eye and punched her in the other eye.
So all the bad people was gone and I just washed my hands and went on with my life..
Oh and I took sarah's cats to..
THE END
Author notes
Do not get mad over this you 2 Cause its just a joke it was for fun....
A contest entry
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I dont really like this :_
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There are lots of spelling errors in this, and there needs to be more punctuation. For example, you need a space between each full stop, and you could put commas in your sentences. Try reading this allowed to yourself. The commas go where you need to breathe. I found this story hard to read, but I'm sure it would be great if you changed the punctuation. Keep writing, Meggh xxxxxxxxxxxx
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It was different from all of the other stories I have read. Despite the grammatical and spelling errors, it was really interesting...Though I doubt that this was really realistic...But anyhow, it's a good story!
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hmmm, the typos were a little distracting for me, but i thought that the idea was pretty clever! thanks for entering.
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fucking great
you rwelated cats to humans almost personification its grreat one of the best -
my sisters name is sara
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saerah lol
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Lol, cute. Sounds like the kind of fantasy that pops into your head when someone's annoying you and you begin imagining what it'd be like to kill them... Apart from the typos, I liked it ^^
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eva im glad you said i put spell on you cause baby let me tell you i am from a line of witches and put cusses on people ,so i say ,from below thank you
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lol that was sooooooooooooo funny. I wish i could do that to an old lady. I liked it
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lol i liked it you need to put upper case letter's on my name and anut kitty's but other than that i love it
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