Beginnings. (Lyra)

She watched as her mother's heart was torn from her body, she was in too much shock to scream.

"I told you if you weren't a good girl I would do this to you, my pretty Mirela." She watched as he slowly ran the back of his hand down her mothers' frozen face. Her mother had once again defied their Master. She sat behind the mirror and watched as he crooned over the corpse. He didn't know she was present.

"What did I ever do wrong? You were my favorite, yet you continued to disobey me?" he pulled her red hair up to his nostrils and took a deep breath. The clothes from her mother were torn from her as he exhaled. She watched as he desecrated the body. She had to get away.

Night was falling, he had finally left. All that remained of her body were ashes. He had decided to cremate the corpse. Tears slid down Lyra's face. She packed her bags with her belongings, there wasn't much. She was running away.

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Yeah, she got a short part...

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  • Unpredictable Lover
    March 28, 2007

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    Hmm

    Haha, poor girl. Kinda sad but...really short. I have to read your others later. This would be better if it was longer though. But since its just to know everything about the character, i think I'll say its fine....


    • Kaori
      March 28, 2007
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      yeah, i know... i wanted to make it longer... but i couldn't think x.x