Once upon a time there was a beautiful princess. She was perfect, long blond hair, soft skin, the picture you think of when you think of beautiful. She met a handsome prince and they fell deep in love-
Okay, fuck that shit
She’s not a princess, though she is beautiful and he sometimes calls her that, and she has already met the man of her dreams. She hates him with every cell in her body, with every drop of energy she gleans from her starving tissue.
And tonight, she’s having a nightmare, the same one that comes most every night. Only she's not sleeping.
A man walks into her room. She tries to feign sleep but when he speaks, she gives up.
“Come on, honey, it’s not gonna hurt.” It will- she has told him so, but he doesn’t care. She turns onto her back and looks at him, eyes accusing.
“Come on, don’t look at me like that…it’s not wrong, Sweety, just how life is.” And he pulls the blankets down. Her night gown, a short, silk, sleeveless gown, was a gift from him on her last birthday. Eight years old, she was that day. Eight fucking years old. He does not even bother undressing himself or her, just unbuttons his pants and fucks her ‘til she wants to scream.
But she doesn’t. She can’t. Not anymore. Her voice is gone. Has been since the first time, five years ago, when he held the knife in the air and threatened to kill her little sister if she screamed. She hasn’t said a word since.
When he leaves, she soaks her pillow with tears. It doesn’t matter anymore.
She curls into a ball, falling asleep, once again, on bloodied sheets.
A contest entry
- Flash In The Pan! by Chemical Imbalance.
350 points, ended March 31, 2007, 12 entries
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omfg
you are...insane
are we even fucking related sometimes>?!
good story btw
killed me on the inside
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wow that sucks lots but like the way its wrote
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what is that supposed to mean?
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This was a very interesting story. A hard topic to tackle and you took a different approach to it, which was refreshing to see. It could use a bit of polishing, but that's no biggie. Thanks for enterting the contest and good luck.
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Nice, but the begining was a wee bit to rough, I think you Could smooth it out a little more if you wanted to. But I liked the story, very scary to acually relise that that *bunny* goes on in real life.
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wow good job i liked it
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wow...great story....i mean.....wow!! bravo sweetheart...bravo! -
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thanks, pretty girlie
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O.o
okay...then....well written?
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yeah, go ahead and do that O.o at me, but it's such a pretty story, huh?
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yesh, it is... but you still get little eye-ball thingys..
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