Karma

The wind blew his wavy hair into a black frenzy, dancing to the rhythm of the unknown. His piercing green eyes searched the landscape and landed directly on my hiding spot. My heart began to speed up as he took a step forward. “Hello there,” he said in his deep somewhat calming voice as a smile played upon his smooth face, “you can come out now.”

“DANGIT! How do you always know I’m there?” I sighed and came out from behind the bramble of bushes. A twig was stuck in my hair. I sighed once again.

"I'm just good like that," he gave me one of his 'all-knowing' looks, which made me laugh. "We should go get ready now," he smiled at me once again. They were going to the dance together. It was the first dance they would attend this year, their Freshman year.

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Yeah... it's unfinished... like the rest of my stories x.x maybe one day... i'll finish it! (The title will come in play later in the story... somehow...)

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  • Neferteri
    April 30, 2007

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    Mk

    Yea I'd like to see you add to this. Some of what you described the guy as like his smile and his voice and stuff made me think of Brett. =)


  • Unpredictable Lover
    March 28, 2007
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    Hehehehehe this is kinda weird.....