Calcifer

Calcifer was a kitten who liked to wander off and look for an adventure. While Calcifer’s brothers and sisters played with eachother, Calcifer would wander around the house on his own and find new things to play with.

One day Calcifer came across a big tree and wanted to try and climb it. He was still very small and had a hard time climbing. When he finally reached the top he had fun playing in the dirt and digging holes.

Suddenly he was picked up and taken away by the little girl who named him. She told Calcifer that her mother wouldn’t like him making a mess of her plant. She also wouldn’t be happy when she saw how dirty Calcifer was. The little girl gave Calcifer a bath and Calcifer didn’t like being wet at all.

Calcifer scratched the little girls face and purred in delight when he saw the blood from her eyes trickle down her soft creamy white cheeks. Calcifer was dropped to the floor when the little girl covered her face, screaming in agony.

The little girl screamed for her mommy when Calcifer clawed his way up her leg and up her back. The little girl tried to shake Calcifer off but Calcifer was already on her shoulder. Biting into her neck Calcifer hit her jugular vein sending a long stream of blood onto the tiled floor and flower themed walls.

Calcifer jumped off the little girl as she fell to the floor and made his way to the tree to continue playing his game which he was so rudely interrupted from.

The End

Author notes

This was an assignment I got for Creative Writing...I was supposed to write a children's story to read to a 2nd grade class and I got off track.

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  • Drac
    March 30, 2007

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    Got off track? How much further off track can you be? Brilliant!
    I was laughing so hard when the story suddenly turned, and at the same time, I was horrified
    I kept imagening you reading this to a 2nd grader
    Very well done! Very well written!
    I loved it!

    beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 4, characters: 5.