"Hey Nik!" Shane yelled.1
"What?" she yelled back from the bathroom, where she was making an attempt to get dressed.2
"Come out here for a minute. You've gotta hear this!" There was laughter in his voice.3
She went into the bedroom to find him sitting at the small table, completely absorbed in the screen of his laptop computer. The mischievous grin on his face warned that he was doing something naughty. She cautiously walked up behind him.4
"What are you doing?" she asked slowly.5
"I was checking my e-mail, and I found this...I don't know who sent it to me, but listen."6
"I'm listening," she said, trying to look interested.7
"It says, 'Sticks and stones may break my bones, but whips and chains excite me. So throw me down and tie me up and show me that you like me.8
"'Roses are red, lemons are sour, so open your legs and give me an hour9
"'Eat me, beat me, bite me, blow me. Suck me, fuck me very slowly. If you kiss me, don't be sassy; use your tongue and make it nasty!"10
He attempted to do just that, turning to give her a kiss and laughing at her expression.11
Nikki rolled her eyes. "You are such a perv! I should spank you for saying something like that!" she joked, acting like the prude they both knew she wasn't.12
He bent over slightly and reached for his beltloops to pull down his pants.13
"Shane! Don't you dare!" she shrieked.14
"What?" he asked, too innocently. "You said you were gonna spank me," he reminded. 15
"I was kidding, you idiot!"16
He played along, shaking his finger at her in his best imitation of his grandmother. "Now that's no fair, young lady. You shouldn't go around making promises you don't intend to keep." He grabbed her by the arm to pull her closer. Ignoring her giggled protests, he pulled one of her hands around behind him and placed it on his ass, sqeezing her fingers around one firm cheek. "You said you were going to spank me, now I want to be spanked."17
He let her hands go, but they continued to wander with a mind of their own. She started to laugh. "If only your mother could hear you now!" She sighed. "She'd be so proud of her son...He's almost 24, and he's still stuck at age 13!"18
"But she's not here, so are you gonna do it or what?" he challenged, waggling his eyebrows.19
"Actually," she admitted, torturing him with searching hands, "I've never really been into that kind of thing, but I think you'll like what I have in mind..." she said huskily, her fingers busy at his belt.20
He let out a long-suffering groan as she sank to the carpet in front of him.21
Author notes
"A Taste of Heaven" and "A Second Taste Of Heaven" were both taken from the same story as this, I just changed them to first person before I posted them. Reading those two may give you a better idea of the relationship between these two characters. Something not said in either of those stories is that Nikki is an aspiring actress, so they are very playful, like in this scene. Anyway, I plan to post more of this. let me know if you enjoy it or if posting more is just a waste of my time...
What did you think? Please comment!
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very good
This was very well written. The conversation between your characters was believable and I could easily see it as something that could happen.
Nicely penned.
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Stimulating
Like Shakespeare's plays within plays -- you;ve written erotica within erotica. I love the use of the light S/M on the computer screen evolving into the "real life erotica" of the spanking incidenst. This is a great way to pull the reader into a more vivid participation in the sensual portions of the story. -
A very good description of an actual event. And yes you should post more as the story unfolds. Damn good!
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hehe, thats a very funny piece but sexy with it, very good stuff!
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Hey girl. Thanks for the comment. I'm glad you liked it. Ttyl. I'm out for the night. Bya.
~Miranda
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hey,
this is cool yo. i liked it. i agree with HammeR..i could totally visualize this in my head. lol. ROCK ON! awesome job! cya!
~amanda~
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I thought this to be a very excellent write. It was full of energy and moved from person to person very flawlessly. I could see the two of them standing there teasing each other with their words and deeds. It sounded to me like these two characters shared a great bond and enjoyed the company of each other very much. Summing it all up I think you did a wonderful job with this write. Thanx for sharing it with us. Take care.
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Life is strange. What is stranger is that at times we all seem to be actors and actresses playing on an invisible stage.
Thanks for the read,
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This is pretty arousing and a nice one. I liked it. The whole scene was very nicely described.
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You're welcome and I know that it did come from an e-mail because my boyfriend sent the same one to me.
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well-written
there's no doubting yourliterary talent.you are a great artist.a bit wild for my likings but for the audience that you do attract,i think they will be thrilledit is a great job. -
Thanks for your comment. I'm glad you enjoyed it. the rhyme he supposedly read to her off of the internet actually did come from the internet. One of my friends read it to me, and I thought it was funny, so I just had to write about it. Anyway, thanks again.
~Miranda
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This is good and funny. I can imagine this in my head, and I would like to read more.
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Excellent Way to go!
Oh boy I'm the first to view this Miranda and what another hot write you have yet weaved her keep it up my dear I want to see more hot and juicy work like this.
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