Josh reached his country home in Lanoiner; it has been thirteen years since he had been here. This last time he had been here was when his mother died of an unknown illness. After the day that his mother died, nothing cheered him up. His nemesis Samantha or Sam, that’s what he called her. She bugged him everyday, when it was the first time that he had ever lost her, he went to the lake for a walk. When he arrived there, he saw girl’s clothes on the beach. He had scanned the waters from left to right; he saw that is was Sam that was swimming in the waters. An idea popped in his head.
‘Should I take her clothes and hide them somewhere?’ Josh thought, and then he would watch her reaction when she comes out of the water. Josh thought it was a great idea. Josh went quickly to her cloths and ran to the nearest tree and hid. He waited patiently for Sam to get out of the water.
Sam got out of the water to notice that all her clothes were gone. She looked up and down the shore and the beach, but her clothes were not in site.
Josh sucked in his breath when he saw Sam naked for the first time in his life. He felt himself grow uncomfortable in his pants. It was the first time he had ever felt this way. He watched her looking for her clothes. He saw that she started to cry. He never wanted for her to cry.
Sam went to her end of the shore and sat down. She placed her head over her arm that was over her knees. She cried even harder.
He felt his heart break when he saw her cry even harder. He couldn’t take it anymore. He walked to Sam on the shore. He sat down behind her, hugging her close to him.
“I’m so sorry, Sam. I didn’t mean to make you cry. Please forgive me!” Josh pleaded.
Sam turned her head; she saw her cloths between their bodies. Then she felt something poking her lower back, she turned even farther to Josh. She stopped crying.
“Why did you do it?” she asked him.
He stared into her lovely eyes that sucked him in. “You made me mad and I wanted revenge” he explained to Sam. He never noticed that she looked cute and innocent when she was crying. He hugged her even closer, she felt wonderful in his arms. he remembered that he hated her, but he wanted her.
“What’s poking me in my back?” Sam asked trying to look closer between their bodies but Josh stopped her. “I want to see”
“No!” Josh snapped, he placed his head on her naked shoulder. He breathed in her scent; it was the scent of honeysuckle. He wondered if she used soap or it was just her. he placed a gently kiss on her shoulder that had caught her by surprise.
“What are you doing?” Sam demanded.
Josh mouth went to her neck, sucking on her slowly and sweetly that she tingled in confusion. She never felt this way before. She quickly cleared her head and jumped from Josh. The first reaction that came from her was that she kissed him hard between his legs and ran off. She quickly took her clothes and ran to her house as fast as she can with the sound of Josh groaning in the background.
Since that day, everything changed between them, it wasn’t Sam bugging her, and it was him that began to bug her. He was too nice to her; it was beginning to annoy her very much. One day when they were talking. Josh told her that his father is moving to London and he had t o go too.
“You’re moving to London?” Sam asked when he finished telling her.
“My father wants to go to London because mother spirit still remains here.” Josh responded back.
“When are you leaving?” Sam asked. She was concerned that she would lose her best friend.
“Within a week” he said with harshness. He had less than a week to spend with Sam.
“How long will you be gone?” Sam asked.
“My father didn’t tell me” he said. He asked his father but he didn’t answer him. “I’ll promise that I will be back for you”
“Promise?” Sam asked, she had hope in her eyes.
“I promise” he closed the promise with a kiss. He lightly kissed Sam on her lips. He knew that it would be her first kiss. He was proud of himself of being her first.
Sam thought the kiss was sweet, she had mentally promised herself that she would wait for him to come back. When the week ended, years after, she kept her promise.
Author notes
this story is finished, i just didnt type it on my computer yet, i always use a journal. i like to write on the go! so enjoy! ^_^
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This was a very interesting story. You use details and imagery well. I few parts were a bit confusing, but maybe that's just because this isn't the finished story. Good job on this. Thanks for entering the contest and good luck.
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