People say not to follow the light,
But we do anyways
I was running away
Tears in my eyes
I saw the car go the other way
I took no heed
And was struck
It's dark all around now
I can't see a thing
But now I see a light
O so little and bright
Shining with all its might
Waiting for me to come near
Fighting away all my fears
I walk towards the mighty blaze
Provoked by a tiny thought
That all has lost or forgot
Author notes
I wrote this a couple of years ago. Thought i would put it on here for more people to read.
A contest entry
- Give it to me A good old poem...lol by jtnbuck.
200 points, ended May 17, 2007, 15 entries
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this was good great job good luck in the contest
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thanks ^_^
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Oh yea!
I remember this poem. It got put into that book thing didn't it? Its a great one Krysa. =) -
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yeah... i believe it's still up on that site too... dun forgot my pw and everything else to it though. x.x
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I'm glad you put it up here
It is quite a dark poem, but a good one. The visuals I got from reading this were great.
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