It was early morning and the rain was falling hard. The trees were so dense that the foliage formed a canopy over the jungle so only enough rain could come through to gently sprinkle the ground. The sun was just rising so the jungle was still dark and foreboding.
I spotted my prey from a far, a boar. I moved through the jungle closer to it with silence and cat-like grace, my long, striped tail flicking side to side behind me. My keen, blue eyes watched it as it slept, calculating the odds that I could successfully kill it. I crept toward it getting as close as I dared. The stupid creature slept on not suspecting a thing. I crouched down, my back arched, prepared to spring as I let out a low growl.
Suddenly, I sprung pouncing on top of it, claws sinking into its flesh. The boar squealed, flailing as hard as it could trying to break loose of my hold. I was inches from sinking my teeth into it, when I heard voices from somewhere in the dark jungle. In my moment of hesitation the boar scampered off still squealing wildly. I let out a roar of frustration and continued on feeling weary and hungry.
After passing through some dense bushes I saw some sort of contraption on the ground several feet in front of me, inside was a large, juicy slab of meat. The smell of it wafted towards me. I stared at it hungrily; it seemed to be mine for the taking. The contraption it was in looked like some sort of cage. I wondered whether it was safe to go inside or not and retrieve the meat. I decided it was probably harmless and rushed forward greedily to take it. Just as I got inside the cage the door dropped down and slammed shut…I was trapped.
“No, this can’t be happening! I need to escape!” I thought to myself wildly.
I knocked my body with full force against the side of the cage, growling and roaring in anger and frustration when it didn’t move. I paced the cage pondering what else to do, when two figures dressed in khaki colored shirts and shorts, holding long black objects, stepped out of the bushes.
I growled and bared my fangs at them as they approached me.
“Wow, isn’t she a beauty,” commented one of the men, a portly fellow with a thick black mustache, as he peered into the cage at me. I snarled at him and he backed up a bit.
“I was hoping we’d capture one. Think of the profit our zoo will make no that we have her Jonathan,” said the other man, whose green eyes glittered with excitement.
“And she’s a white one which is even better, they’re terribly rare,” Jonathan added. “We’ll use the tranquilizer guns on three then Stanley?”
“Yes, I do believe so,” Stanley replied.
The two men lifted their guns pointing them at me. I knew something was about to go wrong. I roared and lashed out against the side of the cage, desperately trying to escape as Jonathan counted aloud.
“Three…two…one!” he exclaimed.
When the shots hit I swayed. It seemed I became so very tired at that moment, my vision blurred and it appeared there were four men instead of just two. That’s the last thing I remembered before the world around me went black.
When I woke up and looked around I noticed something was wrong. I leapt to my feet and stretched, the ground beneath my feet was this uncomfortable, hard, grey stuff. On all four sides of me metal bars separated me from the unfamiliar outside world. Outside this new, larger cage there were other ones similar to it that held other animals that I had seen before in the jungle. There were more of those unfamiliar human creatures, like the ones who found me in the jungle, walking around. They stared at me, pointing and talking excitedly. I paced the cage feeling agitated. I longed to find a way to leave this scary, new place.
“Mom look! It’s the White Bengal Tiger! Get the camera out! Take a picture mom, I want to show my friends at school!” begged a small child tugging at his mother’s sleeve.
She pulled out a small square object which I suspected to be a camera. Then, without warning, a bright flash of light erupted before my eyes. Roaring and scampering backwards I startled the child and he began to cry.
“What is this place? Am I to stay here forever?” I thought desperately to myself. I gazed around one last time, looking for a way out before lying down in the middle of my cage as the mother and child walked away.
“Maybe if I go to sleep again when I wake up I’ll be back in the jungle lying on the soft ground, my stomach full after a delicious meal. This is all just a dream,” I thought to myself before falling asleep.
However, when I woke up again I realized it wasn’t a dream…it was reality. I was still in a cage and I’m still here to this day. Day after day it’s the same routine, a worker comes in and cleans up my waste and feeds me, I simply lie there watching them, not bothering to try and escape as I’ve tried countless times before and failed. Day after day people come and stare at me, taking those awful pictures. Day after day I seem to get weaker and weaker. I can’t help but think daily what would’ve happened if I’d have just stayed away from the cage and I keep coming up with the same question every day: Will I ever get out of here?
I spotted my prey from a far, a boar. I moved through the jungle closer to it with silence and cat-like grace, my long, striped tail flicking side to side behind me. My keen, blue eyes watched it as it slept, calculating the odds that I could successfully kill it. I crept toward it getting as close as I dared. The stupid creature slept on not suspecting a thing. I crouched down, my back arched, prepared to spring as I let out a low growl.
Suddenly, I sprung pouncing on top of it, claws sinking into its flesh. The boar squealed, flailing as hard as it could trying to break loose of my hold. I was inches from sinking my teeth into it, when I heard voices from somewhere in the dark jungle. In my moment of hesitation the boar scampered off still squealing wildly. I let out a roar of frustration and continued on feeling weary and hungry.
After passing through some dense bushes I saw some sort of contraption on the ground several feet in front of me, inside was a large, juicy slab of meat. The smell of it wafted towards me. I stared at it hungrily; it seemed to be mine for the taking. The contraption it was in looked like some sort of cage. I wondered whether it was safe to go inside or not and retrieve the meat. I decided it was probably harmless and rushed forward greedily to take it. Just as I got inside the cage the door dropped down and slammed shut…I was trapped.
“No, this can’t be happening! I need to escape!” I thought to myself wildly.
I knocked my body with full force against the side of the cage, growling and roaring in anger and frustration when it didn’t move. I paced the cage pondering what else to do, when two figures dressed in khaki colored shirts and shorts, holding long black objects, stepped out of the bushes.
I growled and bared my fangs at them as they approached me.
“Wow, isn’t she a beauty,” commented one of the men, a portly fellow with a thick black mustache, as he peered into the cage at me. I snarled at him and he backed up a bit.
“I was hoping we’d capture one. Think of the profit our zoo will make no that we have her Jonathan,” said the other man, whose green eyes glittered with excitement.
“And she’s a white one which is even better, they’re terribly rare,” Jonathan added. “We’ll use the tranquilizer guns on three then Stanley?”
“Yes, I do believe so,” Stanley replied.
The two men lifted their guns pointing them at me. I knew something was about to go wrong. I roared and lashed out against the side of the cage, desperately trying to escape as Jonathan counted aloud.
“Three…two…one!” he exclaimed.
When the shots hit I swayed. It seemed I became so very tired at that moment, my vision blurred and it appeared there were four men instead of just two. That’s the last thing I remembered before the world around me went black.
When I woke up and looked around I noticed something was wrong. I leapt to my feet and stretched, the ground beneath my feet was this uncomfortable, hard, grey stuff. On all four sides of me metal bars separated me from the unfamiliar outside world. Outside this new, larger cage there were other ones similar to it that held other animals that I had seen before in the jungle. There were more of those unfamiliar human creatures, like the ones who found me in the jungle, walking around. They stared at me, pointing and talking excitedly. I paced the cage feeling agitated. I longed to find a way to leave this scary, new place.
“Mom look! It’s the White Bengal Tiger! Get the camera out! Take a picture mom, I want to show my friends at school!” begged a small child tugging at his mother’s sleeve.
She pulled out a small square object which I suspected to be a camera. Then, without warning, a bright flash of light erupted before my eyes. Roaring and scampering backwards I startled the child and he began to cry.
“What is this place? Am I to stay here forever?” I thought desperately to myself. I gazed around one last time, looking for a way out before lying down in the middle of my cage as the mother and child walked away.
“Maybe if I go to sleep again when I wake up I’ll be back in the jungle lying on the soft ground, my stomach full after a delicious meal. This is all just a dream,” I thought to myself before falling asleep.
However, when I woke up again I realized it wasn’t a dream…it was reality. I was still in a cage and I’m still here to this day. Day after day it’s the same routine, a worker comes in and cleans up my waste and feeds me, I simply lie there watching them, not bothering to try and escape as I’ve tried countless times before and failed. Day after day people come and stare at me, taking those awful pictures. Day after day I seem to get weaker and weaker. I can’t help but think daily what would’ve happened if I’d have just stayed away from the cage and I keep coming up with the same question every day: Will I ever get out of here?
Author notes
I wrote this as an assignment my freshman year in English class. The assignment was to write a story as if you were an animal and your being hunted. I got an A+ on this and I was kind of proud of it so I hope you'll enjoy it. Let me know if there is anything I can improve on I'm always open to criticism.
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Wow,
Amazing story, You got talent, and also, i dont think there was any mistakes. So.. go you? xD -
hjgfbsdkfhskjfsk ENDAGERED SPECIES!! The white Begal tiger's endangered, right? D: Anyway, yeah, this was a really good animal to use for the hunted story!
AAAND, the part:
' “And she’s a white one which is even better, they’re terribly rare,” Jonathan added. “We’ll use the tranquilizer guns on three then Stanley?”
“Yes, I do believe so,” Stanley replied. '
XDD totally reminded me of those chipmunks....Chip and Dale, the ones always agreeing with each other and being all proper and stuff.
I decided a while ago that Chip and Dale were gay. Mmhm. Gay chipmunks.
Woo, anyway, I liked the description of the cement and the cage and stuff and how the tiger scared the little kid...but then as time went on, the tiger just kinda lays there. Because the tigers at the zoo DO all look really bored. :/
~ Erica! ~

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Yeah white bengal tigers are HIGHLY endangered. I think all tiger species are nowadays....
lol I didn't even think about them sounding like Chip and Dale. Chip and Dale are cute though...although whichever one had the big red nose, I didn't like that one I like normal black noses thank you very much. I bet you Chip and Dale are gay...never thought about it before but I'd have to agree with you on that one And of course they make up the Chippendales (sp?) who are those model/stripper guys with the long Fabio hair who I suspect are all gay as well I wonder if Chip and Dale got their names from the Chippendales???
Ha! But can you imagine gay chipmunks!!lol
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Fantastic!
This was an amazing write! Extremely unique topic, and i suspect difficult to write about.
The details in this were magnificently done, and the background descriptions make the reader feel as though they are there, witnessing everything that is occuring.
An eye-opening piece that raises awareness on a topic which is so often ignored these days.
Very well done on this, keep writing
Yrs.
Azaradelle.

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Thanks!
thanks for the comment. Yeah, this one took some thought I must say. And I personally love good descriptions so I try to always encorporate that into my writing. Glad you liked it!
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