The Ride on the Brink of Total Destruction

We avoided eachother's eyes. I was seated on the left listening to my iPod while my siblings were all yelling about...Barney. The big purple dinosaur, or dragon, or...whatever he is, was supossedly drunk for his latest show. It was probably going to be his last show.

Well, anyways, imagine a tin can filled with angry wasps. Concentrate now, they have all been attacked by a grizzly and are now crashing into eachother, beating themselves senseless. This is what went through my mind.

I crank the volume up to blasting. Even Eminem can't drive the noise away with his own noise!

Ok, we are traveling to, can you guess, Disneyworld. A place that you're supposed to bring "happy children." I don't think there are any in this van, as of now.

With the iPod not helping as much as I'd wished for I picked up my literature study book, A Tale of Two Cities. "It was the best of times, it was the worst of times," I'll go with..."it was the worst of times."

Author notes

Because I have to...A Tale of Two Cities by Charles Dickens...lol, this is made for a contest. A bit short I know...lol...This is somewhat inspired by actual events.

A contest entry

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  • DaniCM
    October 5, 2008
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    haha been there


  • Taylor Renee
    April 1, 2007
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    ps-i also really like the title!!!
    Tay

  • Taylor Renee
    April 1, 2007

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    i like this a lot! it was really realistic, ad thats kinda what i like. the writin was really ood too, great job with it! was it made fr my cntest or a different one?
    Tay


  • travis34dietC
    March 26, 2007
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    this is how car rides with my sister are. nice job!


    • Andrew Timothy
      March 26, 2007
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      I think any ride with a sibling goes somewhere along these lines...at least with my brothers, lol


  • DancingThroughLife
    March 25, 2007
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    lol love it.....souds like the car ride i just got done with lol

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