Im A Sick Indvidual

I slit my wrists and let the blood flow,

because I am a sick individual,

with noone to turn to and no place to go.

I regret what I have done to you,

I wish I could take it all back,

I shouldnt of taken advantage of everything we had.

I hear your voice and I want to cry,

you beg me to tell you whats wrong,

and yet again to you I lie.

Im sorry for the pain I caused you,

even though you had done the same to me.

Im sorry that I let you walk away,

I never really wanted you to leave.

Now I am left here alone,

in a world thats so cold.

I want to tell you everything,

but when I call, your never home.

I slit my wrists and I let the blood flow,

because I am a sick indvidual,

with noone to turn to and no place to go.

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I dont usually do the whole rhyming ordeal, but I decided that I change would be nice.

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  • tjj
    March 28, 2007
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    nice i liked it ex for the blood but thats just me


  • Fatjambo
    March 23, 2007

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    I hope this is a product of your imagination, and not based on real feelings.

    Nicely done though.