God Made Me Say Good-bye

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Will you tell him where to go?
show him the way to the gates
have an angel guide his path
up to your grace
Please don't let him be lonely
don't let him be sad
but have him save a kiss for me
So it won't be all that bad
Don't make him feel anymore pain
take him with you, if you must
but I'll miss him, you know I will
but I can put aside my lust2

I never really realized3

how fast time can fly4

until I fell in love, but5

God made me say goob-bye6

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  • Unpredictable Lover
    June 8, 2007

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    Line six should say good-bye instead of goob-bye.


    This is sad, but I like it. I don't like the thought of losing someone I love. Good job ^.^


  • sodancewithsoda silver member
    April 26, 2007
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    I love this a lot.. perhaps, this is how I would feel when someone I love would be taken from me it's a sad thing, that death is a part of our life... but anyway, you've written this beautifully... one little error though.. you said GooB-bye instead of good-bye STILL, this is an art Thank you for sharing this ^_^


  • Taylor Renee
    April 19, 2007

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    awww Lindsay this was really good. I got it...unlike some others ol. this was great keep up the amazing work!!!
    i envy you!!!
    xoxo
    Tay


  • felixangel
    March 26, 2007
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    10/10

    hey tat pretty good i cannot see nothing bad with it


  • iPoopAThug
    March 24, 2007

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    Hmm

    This sounded kinda cool, and a few parts rhymed. I thought it might be about someone dying but I'm not really certain.

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