passage for two

The magician approached the gate in a dream

holding his cat

A giant hand floated there

five fingers spread as if to say STOP.

The magician knew the answer

he spread his fingers as well and touched his thumb to

his palm twice.

The giant hand responded by holding up two fingers

like a peace sign.

The magician held up his middle finger with

the other fingers pointing towards the gate.

as if to say "fuck you" to whatever was behind him.

The giant hand held up its index finger and the hand

moved and pointed to the right.

There on the gate where 4 small lights

which the magician knew must be touched together

3 above and one below.

he shifted the cat and touched them

pinky and thumb for the lower and the other three

fingers touched the above three lights

The magician and the cat were gone

having stepped into the abyss

off to explore the unkown and live the

hitch hikers guide to the galaxy.

having left behind the cities that burned

as people fought in the streets.

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  • Oblivion Kitty God silver member
    March 23, 2007

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    Um... well this is a nice little dabble, I suppose. Never read any of those books or watched the movie, but I heard it was entertaining. Nonetheless, this entry is far too short for my contest. I asked for around 1,500 words at the least. Thank you for entering, though. You can remove this (or edit it) and submit a story of proper length. Thanks!