"Let's practice kissing," Marybeth said. Marybeth was my best friend and she was always pragmatic.1
"What do you mean?" I said hesitantly.2
"Let's french kiss so we'll know what to do when we kiss our boyfriends," she said very enthusiastically. She had long blonde hair with the bangs in front crossing over her right eye. Always stylish with a precocious smile and winning green eyes. Outgoing, polite to a fault, and yet adventurous; she was everything I wanted to be.3
My hair was brown and my eyes a pretty enough hazel, but her figure was more developed than mine and we were only fifteen! I had never french kissed and I guessed that neither had she. I had never really thought of kissing a girl before. I had never really thought much about kissing. I had no boyfriend and I didn't think Marybeth did.4
"You have a boyfriend?" I asked.5
"Lori, Tommy Jenkins asked me out to a movie. I don't want to seem like I don't know what I am doing."6
We were together in my bedroom. My parents weren't home yet, but they would be in about an hour and an hour after that we would have dinner. Marybeth was staying for dinner and we were going to do our homework and play computer games. I would have never thought we would be kissing.7
"I'd feel kind of funny about it," I told her still trying to avoid kissing her. I didn't know quite why. Maybe it was because I had been brought up thinking that it was a homosexual thing to do and therefore wrong. I don't know, exactly; but I wasn't ready.8
"Oh come on!" insisted Marybeth. "It isn't going to hurt anything."9
After a few minutes of silence she said, "Please, Lori. Just this once. We never have to do it again."10
More moments passed and finally I said, "Oh. All right."11
She came right up to me and looked me in the eyes and we both broke out laughing unable to initiate the kiss. We regained our composure and then began laughing again as we tried to kiss. Each time she touched me, it tickled me. Chills went down my spine. I don't think it bothered her as much. Finally we kissed on the lips and we nearly spit as we once again erupted in giggles. After that we managed to open our mouths and touch tongues for about a minute.12
"Let's do it some more," said Marybeth.13
I was rather non-commital. I hadn't really felt much of anything. We kissed again for a couple of minutes and Marybeth became much more involved. Me, I was less active at the kissing, but I was beginning to feel things. I liked embracing Marybeth and kissing her. We kissed again and I put as much of myself into it as I could. Our tongues danced together. Marybeth kissed in the vein of a student and I returned her kiss feeling emotionally and physically as I never had before with an excitement new to me that I did not understand.14
We practiced kissing for about an hour. We stopped when my parents got home as though afraid they might catch us. I didn't want to stop. New feelings for Marybeth were brewing inside me. I didn't know what they meant. It would be years before I came to a full understanding.15
"That was fun," said Maybeth. "Thanks."16
"No problem," I told her, but I didn't try to explain how I felt. I didn't really know myself. I don't think Marybeth thought anything about it. She was just practicing for the real thing. It had been nothing more to her than that. I, however; was deeply moved and changed.17
We never kissed again and I never told her how much I wanted to kiss her again. To her it was as she promised, just a one time thing to prepare herself for the real thing which meant kissing Tommy Jenkins. In fact, they kissed often I am certain as she dated him for about a year. I was slower to start dating, but I did begin dating and I dated boys. Still, I will never forget the crush I had on Marybeth. I love her even now. She loves me, too; but her love is in a platonic sense. My love for her will always be so much more.
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A contest entry
- Two Sides of A Kiss by denwayz.
550 points, ended April 10, 2007, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next story in this contest, remove from contest - Out of the Closet by Kevan.
375 points, ended May 20, 2007, 18 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next story in this contest, remove from contest - Gay pride!! by HeartSxAnDxStripeS.
315 points, ended June 27, 2007, 21 entries
Honorable mention
• next story in this contest, remove from contest - Talk Hard. [contest] by mooseyx3.
375 points, ended August 21, 2007, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next story in this contest, remove from contest - Give Me A Gay/Lesbian Love Story by Nickolasjames.
400 points, ended August 18, 2007, 6 entries
Honorable mention
• next story in this contest, remove from contest - Young&&&insane. by Melli.
140 points, ended December 6, 2007, 6 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next story in this contest, remove from contest - Picture Inspired........or other things! by J-Menz223.
350 points, ended March 8, 2008, 15 entries
Gold trophy winner
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220 points, ended May 18, 2008, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next story in this contest, remove from contest - True Teenage Love by bakermiddle.
170 points, ended April 27, 2008, 11 entries
Honorable mention
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129 points, ended June 14, 2008, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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275 points, ended October 9, 2008, 19 entries
Honorable mention
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200 points, ended November 27, 2008, 11 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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160 points, ended December 27, 2008, 44 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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175 points, ended February 25, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
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193 points, ended May 18, 21 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next story in this contest, remove from contest - I WANT ROMANCE!!!!!! by ManualLoveLetter.
175 points, ended May 8, 14 entries
Honorable mention
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140 points, ended August 25, 2 entries
Gold trophy winner
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275 points, ended May 9, 19 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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135 points, ended July 5, 3 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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170 points, ended August 28, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
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300 points, ended October 27, 31 entries
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Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I liked this very much, it was well written and definitely interesting but I did ask for love between a boy and a girl.
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I liked this. It was very interesting!
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Hi Stefza!
I'm very pleased that you like this story. Thanks for hosting this contest and for reading and commenting. I appreciate it.
I hope you have many good entries and much fun.
Andy
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This is an interesting story.
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Hi Sabir!
Thanks for stopping by, reading, commenting, and all the applause. I appreciate it.
I hope you were entertained by this story.
Andy
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Thanks for entering my contest
First of all, I have to say congratulations on hooking me - normally, stories with girl-on-girl stuff don't interest me (I'm more into guy-on-guy), but I really liked this.
You manage to make it seem realistic, and I could almost feel Lori's feelings for Marybeth at the end.
Well done, and thanks again!
~ Lí-Lí
beginning: 5, language: 4, plot: 5, ending: 4, dialog: 4, characters: 4.
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Hi there!
I'm very pleased that you were hooked on this story and that you like it. I had fun trying to climb into the character of two teenage girls. Thanks for hosting this contest and for reading and commenting.
Andy
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Woww lol this is really kwl. Obviously her friend means a lot to her, and it doesn't matter in what way.
You obviously have a talent at writing and I'm going to read more of your stories!!
Well done and thanks for entering
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Hi PH!
Again I'm very pleased that you like this story. It's fun to climb into characters completely unlike oneself and to try to imagine how they would feel and act.
If you want to read more of my stuff, here's a link to writes that aren't categorized adult. Some may have adult themes, but they don't have restricted content.
http://storywrite.com/list/38030-For-Those-Fourteen-Or-Younger
Andy
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I'm sorry, but I'm not a fan of the story. I'm only 13, and that was kind of innapropriate for me. I asked for nothing too bad for someone my age, and that was a bit too much. It was a good story, though, as I could see from the may trophis it has won, but that isn't the type of stories I like, being 13. Good try though.
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Hi!
It's hard to determine what is age appropriate. The readers before you were younger and liked this story. I didn't feel it needed to be rated adult. I've been told that the characters should acutally be younger, by some.
Anyway, thanks for hosting and reading.
Andy
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It was nice. Quite original. I really didn't like the MaryBeth character. I didn't know if you wanted that or not. To me she seamed like a slut. I did feel Lori, though, the confusion and discomfort was played well, but more detail wouldnt hurt toward her odd emotions. Good luck with the contest!
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Hi there!
I'm very happy that you like this story.
I didn't really concern myself when I was writing this with how the reader would like Marybeth. My main interest was in developing Lori's character.
It might be nice to expand on this story at some point, but it's good to have some short ones to enter into contests requiring short writes.
Andy
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i love it!
Hi, thanks for entering my competition, I have read this story before and have loved it, in fact it was the first piece of writing I rad on storywrite! Good luck in the contest, louisethebeaver.
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Hi Louise!
I'm glad you like this story the second time around. If you commented before, it was too short to get stars.
Thanks for hosting this contest and for reading and commenting.
Andy
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Aw, Andy!!!!!
I feel so bad but I must remove the story!!! I have to end Devil's Cove because there are no other entries...
~Duality.
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Hi!
I have no problem with it, of course. I appreciate that you explained why.
Andy
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Umm, I'm 14, you probably should've looked at that.
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Hmm?
This isn't categorized as adult. There have been many younger than you who have read and like this story. All that's involved is kissing.
Andy
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"Enthusiastically" is the correct way to spell it. And I thought that Marybeth was two names, therefore spelled: "Mary-Beth"? Lol. You got the girly acting right on! Amazing! But I guess that after 50 years you'd pick up a little bit of everything It sounds a bit wrong with this sentence, "Each time she touched me, it tickled me as her hands made contact", where you basically tell the same thing twice; that Marybeth touches Lori. Gosh, what's wrong with this girl? She seems so intense! Wouldn't mind her on me, though
"Non-commital", what is that? Or did you mean non-comical? ...Oh, I get it now... Looks like they won't need any boyfriend, at least not yet. Ok, maybe Well, I've never approved BEING gay, though they gays I know are nice. But when you put it this way, it almost doesn't seem like any sin to be gay. I liked this story, too. It wasn't much suspense, but my head works fine, and I could imagine just fine I especially liked the ending 
Good job!
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Hi Millennio!
It's funny that no one has pointed out those mistakes before and that I've missed them. Oh well, fixed now.
I had fun with this little story, exploring that a young teen might be confused with her mixed feelings and the discovery of her sexuality.
Andy
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Lol. Yeah. Makes you think, doesn't it? Even if you were to make these things up as you go, it kind of makes you stop and dig into yourself to find out what you'd do in that situation or what others' reactions and actions might habve been there and then. I like doing so, too, though I've never written anything like this before.
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Hi Millennio!
Being a writer is wonderful. You can be anyone you want and do anything. The only limits are one's imagination. I definitely love it.
How else could a fat old man become a teenage girl
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Andy
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I agree, lol
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I'm not the biggest fan of these kinds of stories, but I think that you did an amazing job with this! Every detail kept me holding on. I definetly would read more of this. Nice job, and keep writing!
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Hi!
I'm very pleased you like this story in spite of not being your preferred reading. What type of stories do you like?
Thanks for reading and commenting. I appreciate it.
Andy
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I'm more into the straight relationships -- you know the make-up break-up sort of thing...but I did truly enjoy this story!
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Well,
I'm straight, but it was fun stepping into the shoes of these teenagers.
Andy
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holy cow! this was really good! I can totally understand it
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Hi Christa!
I'm glad you like this story. You're co-hosting this contest, aren't you? I hope you have a lot of fun with it.
I'm glad you like this story.
Andy
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Andy?!? yo uwrote a lesbian encounter?!?!?! my experience was so much different...
yes, i am co-hosting and Pretty and I will be doing another here soon...
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Hmmmm...
I'm not sure I really like Gay/lesbian stories! I'll never do that, but this was a VERY good story! I really liked it! But only YOU can write like this, I guess.
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wow..thats alot of contests, anyways, nice storyline, it was cute, but some of it sounded slightly awkward
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Hi Carina!
It's possible that I've entered this story in more contests than I have any of my other stories. I don't know. If I don't place, I remove my stories from the contests. 'Dark Fury' has won the most trophies for me.
Slightly awkward? How would you change it?
Thanks for hosting, reading, and commenting. I hope you have a great contest with many good entries and much fun.
Andy
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Odd but fantasic! Remember though, is it for 8-13 year olds? Good luck in the contest!
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Well,
This isn't an adult story, although some adults enjoy it. I guess it depends on when a kid starts thinking about kissing and such.
Anyway, thanks for hosting and for commenting.
Andy
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hm. you know what, I've done almost the same thing and fallen in love to. well, I can relate to this well. keep writing. if you wanted to, you could expand this!
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Hi!
Thanks for hosting this contest and for reading, commenting, and all the applause. I appreciate it.
I hoped that this story was believable when I wrote it. I never french kissed anyone of the same sex, so it's strictly a fictional account on my part. I've also never been a teenage girl.
As a writer, it's fun to step into different characters and roles.
It might be interesting to expand this. I hadn't really thought about it. Have you ever co-written?
Andy
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Hm, I've never really co-written, but it could be fun. This kind of thing I actually could write though. Lol, and that would be quite odd if you had been a teenage girl at one point.
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Hmm?
If you'd like to, you can rewrite this story and expand on it. Show me as a collaborator. When you've finished and posted it, I'll read it over and we could work on it from there if I feel like anything could be added. Would you like to try that?
Andy
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sure! just to let you know, it could take me a while. I'm trying to put a bunch of stories to the r.i.p bin, and decide what to keep and continue to work on.
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i don't see the heartbreak here. feel free to explain, though. this is a very good story, and a well-developed on at that. good job.
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Hi Iceblue!
Thanks for hosting this contest and for reading and commenting. I appreciate it.
Rockerboy has explained pretty well what I was thinking. You might consider it more a case of unrequited love, than heartbreak.
I'm very pleased you like this story.
I hope you have many good entries and much fun.
Andy
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I believe it's because poor Lori, after having the kiss with Marybeth... She wants her back, but she cannot. And that's the heartbreak in it. Knowing that she'll never get Marybeth to be with her
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Hi Rockerboy!
You're correct. Thanks,
Andy
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This was amazing! It suits a lot of awkward situations that teenagers face. Girls especially. I know I've been there. This was nicely written, well worded and highly effective. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. And thanks for reading the rules
beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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Hi!
This seems to be a repeat of your comment from earlier. I hope your contest goes well.
Andy
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Great idea and nicely written! I love how you can relate to teens today so easily
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Hi!
I'm very pleased that you like this story. I'm glad that you feel I can relate to teens. Sometimes I feel I have the heart of a sixteen year old.
Thanks for reading me and for commenting and all the applause. I appreciate it.
Andy
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This is really awesome! I love the angle you took on that kind of situation. It really fits into all the the kinds of awkward things teenagers have to endure and I wish you the best of luck in all the contests you have entered this in.
~~Rose
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Hi Rose!
I appreciate you reading me and commenting.
Yep, I've got this story in a lot of contests and it has won a fair share of trophies for me. I enjoyed writing this story and it's good to have a story that I can enter into contests hosted by those who don't want adult material. Much of what I write is adult.
Thanks for dropping by.
Did you get a list made?
Andy
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This was amazing! It suits a lot of awkward situations that teenagers face. Girls especially. I know I've been there. This was nicely written, well worded and highly effective. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. And thanks for reading the rules
beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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Hi!
I'm very pleased that you like this story. I had fun writing it. I'm glad you can relate.
Thanks for hosting this contest and for reading, commenting, and applauding. I appreciate it.
May you have many good entries and much fun.
Andy
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Interesting story! The narrator seems like she could be a little more nervous, and maybe even a little more afraid of her actions and/or her emotional response to them, if for no other reason than the fact that she was raised to believe kissing a member of the same sex was a homosexual act and therefore wrong.
That small issue aside, I thought this story was very realistic and unlike some of the other comments below, I think it was a good rendition of a fifteen year old girl. Now I'll be honest, I never practiced kissing with a person (lol, actually, if you can believe it, I practiced with my pillow) but to no avail as at 21 I've still never had a boyfriend.
That said, the giggles and the laughter you involved were hugely realistic and really connected the reader to the characters. I loved the conclusion where, when she did start dating, she dated guys, but did not forget the emotions she had for her friend.
It has been said that homosexuality or heterosexuality are both nothing more than sexual "preferences". By "preferences" that indicates simply answering the question: of the two sexes, which would you "prefer" to be with? I think the character has answered that question for herself.
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Hi Rainy!
Thanks so much for reading me. I appreciate it. I'm glad you felt that this story is realistic. I really enjoy trying to climb into the shoes of my female characters. I'm not really good with character development, but I'm improving, I hope.
I could probably expand on this story, but I like the way it reads and I wouldn't want to ruin its flavor.
Andy
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yea that was good but kinda ewwie. COME ON DUDE I AM 11!!!!!!!!
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Hi Clary!
Too much for you? Hmm. It just had kissing. I was eleven once. Oh well, thanks for hosting this contest and for reading and commenting.
Andy
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This was very cute, but I think that the characterization made the girls seem younger than fifteen, and the writing seemed like it was written by someone older that had forgotten what it was like to be fifteen. Other than that I really enjoyed the piece. Good luck and thanks for entering my contest.
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Hi!
I'm glad you like this story.
I am, of course, older than fifteen and I was never a fifteen year old girl. It was just an idea for a story that I chose to develop.
Thanks for hosting this contest and for reading and commenting. I appreciate it. I hope you have many good entries and much fun.
Andy
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That was really good. really well written. It was A bit rushed To be honest, but otherwise EXCELLENT. Something I can relate to
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Thanks for hosting this contest and for reading and commenting. I appreciate it. May you have many good entries and much fun.
I'm glad you like this story. You felt it was a bit rushed? What would you suggest to improve it?
Andy
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Wow. It's pretty short, yet so sad. I mean, to be honest I'm not a very vocal supporter of gay rights, but I do feel a certain amount of sympathy. However, most girls in her situation would be pretty scared, so you need to elaborate on her fear. Otherwise, despite too much drama, it was a shocking twist. I thought it would be another cliched boy/girl story.
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Hi!
Thanks for reading me again and for commenting and all the applause. I appreciate it.
In my writing, I sometimes have stories about lesbian or bi relations.
I'm not terribly active in supporting gay rights. I have only one story that specifically does. I think gays should have the same rights as anyone.
I hope you like this story.
Andy
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Wow. I really like this. Great job. I also love the idea of the story. Very creative. I wish you the best of luck in my contest.
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Hi!
Thanks for hosting this contest and for reading and commenting. I appreciate it. May you have many good entries and much fun. I'm very pleased that you like this story.
Andy
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Hmm? Guess you didn't like this story much? Oh well, that's a shame.
Thanks for reading and commenting. I appreciate it. Thanks also for stopping by.
Andy
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yeah... i can remember when i first ended up kissing a girl. i was slightly drunk, but that doesn't mean i didn't like it. lol. im sorry that marybeth didn't love the main character the way the main character loved her. i can feel for her, only my very best friend is a guy. this was good. i really liked it, and it shows the innocence of love in a way. you did a very good job.
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Hi Ms Soul!
I'm very pleased that you like this story and that it brought to you good memories. My first real kisses were with a girl. We were both about thirteen. If she hadn't moved(she and her parents, that is), we'd have probably done much more than kiss
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Thanks for hosting this contest and for reading, commenting, and all the applause. I appreciate it. May you have many good entries and much fun.
Andy
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awesome, kinda hot too. lol. x
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Hi!
I hope your contest went well. I saw that you had a lot of entries. Thanks for hosting. I'm glad you like this story.
Andy
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I probably should have put no les/bi stories in my rules but okay.
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Thanks for hosting this contest and for reading and commenting. I appreciate it.
I hope you like this story anyway.
May you have many good entries and much fun.
Andy
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This was a good story but in my contest I did say no lesbian storys. Don't get me wrong, I am not against it. I will make an exception this time though because I have for another competitor. It was a good enough story for me to consider it in the top 4.
Good job with your techniques at writing, it was easily understandable with few mistakes and it felt as though you were there because of the description.
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Sorry
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Thanks for hosting this contest and for reading and commenting. I appreciate it. May you have many good entries and much fun.
Andy
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Wow! this one is quite different from the enteries i was expecting and believe me reading it was a great experience for me
you really well discribed the whole situation and emotions going on in Lori's mind. I felt bad about her because one sided love always painful for a person but i guess that is a beauty and a twist of this story.
well done dear,this was really something different from normal
Good luck and have a nice day!
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Hi Lavanya!
I'm very pleased you like this story. It's one of my favorites of the stories I've written.
Thanks for hosting this contest and for reading, commenting, and all the applause. I appreciate it. I hope you have many good entries and much fun.
Andy
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NO MISTAKES!!
this was great description and moving and emotional and heartwarming and for a first kiss, it was so different for a short story!! great work!!
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Thanks Kyndal!
Thanks for hosting this contest and for reading, commenting, and all the applause. I'm very pleased you like this story.
May you have many good entries and much fun.
Andy
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This was...different. I personally wouldn't 'practice' kissing with my best friend. Thanks for entering, and sorry its took me so long to get to it.
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Well,
I don't think I'd practice kissing with my best friend unless she was a she I was also attracted to. I'm pretty much straight, so I'm not attracted toward guys, but this seemed like a good story idea. I hope you like this story some.
Thanks for hosting this contest and for reading, commenting, and all the applause. I appreciate it. May you have many good entries and much fun.
Andy
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I knew I have seen this before! My opinion still stands... It's somewhere down there.... 5 from the top. Well, now it's six...
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Sorry about that!
I guess I should have checked, but I didn't remember entering it in your earlier contest. I'm glad you like this story, but I looked for something you haven't read.
Andy
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XD Actually, this kinda reminds me of me and my... well.. Old best friend. I mean, we never kissed, but yeah...
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Thank You
Thanks for hosting this contest and for reading and commenting. I appreciate it. I hope you like this story.
May you have many good entries and much fun.
Andy
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lovely!
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good luck in the contest!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Thanks
Thanks for hosting this contest and for reading and all the applause. I appreciate it.
May you have many good entries and much fun.
Andy
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I've been through this before and I feel like you've captured the spirit of this painful questioning with the honesty and pain that comes with a one-way love. You have done a wonderful job with characterization and the plot, however simple, is one that can be found in many cases. It's realistic and abrasively beautiful.
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Thank You
Thanks for hosting this contest and for reading and commenting. I appreciate it. I'm glad you like this story.
May you have many good entries and much fun.
Andy
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Very sweet. I think you captured the atmosphere, emotions, and excitement of a first kiss very well.
I feel sorry for the girl for I know how it feels to be close but oh so far away from the one you love.
I found a minor spelling error otherwise very well written and even a little hot;
4th paragraph s/b "I never really thought" next sentence too. Guess spell checker doesn't catch missing the t
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Hi
Thanks for reading, commenting, all the applause, and noticing the missing (t)s. I appreciate it. I'm very pleased that you like this story. Marybeth thought nothing of practice kissing, while Lori was surprised to find herself sexually attracted to her girlfriend.
Andy
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That was an interesting piece. Good writing.
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Thanks for hosting this contest and for reading and commenting. I'm glad you enjoyed this story. I'm not sure if it's good or bad that you couldn't say more. Anyway, I like this story and I felt it would be good in your contest.
May you have many good entries and much fun.
Andy
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Great writing! Vivid Descriptions; I felt my tongue dancing! You've done a great job in capturing the moment of transition of the teenage mind. Excellent read! Thank you for entering the contest!!
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Thank You
Thanks for hosting this contest and for reading, commenting, and all the applause. I appreciate it. I'm very pleased that you enjoyed this story so much.
May you have many good entries and much fun.
Andy
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Thank You
Thanks Kat, for hosting this contest and for reading and commenting. I apprecciate it. I'm very pleased you like my story.
May you have many good entries and much fun.
Andy
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Very well written and unique. It was a believable situation, too.
Thank you for entering, and I'm sorry if my comment doesn't seem enthusiastic or interested, it's just been a very long couple of days, you know?
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Thank You
Thanks for hosting this contest and for reading and commenting. I appreciate it. I hope you like this story.
I can empathize with you. I had a couple of long days and I crawled into bed and hid there for most of the day to recover..
May you have many good entries and much fun.
Andy
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