Will You Remember Me?

I saw your face

on a subway train

So sad, so tired

Your eyes full of pain

I comforted you

The best I could

Spoke my few words of wisdom

As a good friends should

Soon it grew more the friends

And together we rose above

Everyone's expectations

And we fell in love

We spent our life togther

Sharing each moment on

Laughing, smiling, dancing

Forever on

But things got dangerous

War broke, mothers greived

The loss of their sons

You had to leave

To fight against

Our brutal foes

And what happens there, no one let us know

I'm ashamed I let you go

But I had to stay free

So while you march off to war

Will you remember me?

I think of you everyday

Dreaming by the old willow tree

And I did, and still remember you

Will you remember me?

If you die

And enjoy heaven's glee

I can't help but wonder

Will you remeber me?

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  • heartfullofvenom
    February 26, 2008

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    Aw, it is really sweet.

    I love the repetition of "will you remember me?"...

    well, I will always remember this story/poem for sure.

    You better keep writing. You have a talent.

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    ♥


  • iPoopAThug
    March 24, 2007

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    Good

    I've read a few of your works and they seem to be pretty darn good, and really emotional. This was no exception.


  • Mel-the-Believer
    March 21, 2007

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    Oh my gosh! I absolutely loved that. I truly did. It was really wonderful. Awsome job with this. Keep on writing. God Bless!