Tick tock, tick tock. It was becoming louder with every second. Her eyes closed tight. Maybe they would all go away tonight. Her ears strained as they listened for other sounds besides the clock. Her imagination started to wander, they were closer. She buried herself under her covers. "Leave me alone," she whispered into the darkness. She waited for an answer, none came. She stuffed her fingers in her ears, curled up in fetal position, and began to hum. The minutes passed, she was safe under her covers, they would not get her this night. Sleep finally conquered her.
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Whats with uber shortness!!!! C'mon Krysa, develop these ideas! They're all so good, you need to extend them!!! -
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Ummmm.... i'm bad at making them longer? =P
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I like this...it was good....short but good. I think it would have bored me if it were any longer
Very good.
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I think if i had made it any longer, i would have gotten bored of it myself...
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This reminds me of when I was a child and used to get a little scared and pull my duvet over my head too. Sometimes the Demons are real. There's certainly enough of them in this life to see one or two
I think the one paragraph worked just fine, well done
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That was short....o.o
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yeah... i didn' know where to start on the second paragraph, so eh.
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