Miss Clitheroe



MISS CLITHEROE

by Robert Davidson

And They Thought She Had Missed Out On Love.

They called her an old maid, said Maud Clitheroe never had a chance to test her virtue, said she was like a pressed flower in a book. But little did they know - You just didn't boast about it when she was young.

As she moved in the garden, she touched a crocus - its little golden phallus pressing the air. And allowed her mind to flicker amongst the tufts and wands of plants in the garden - And that curved red thorn on the rose bush.

Suddenly there were images ... alternating in the dancing sunlight. The past popping up in embarrassing guise, often with landslides of emotion. 'Did you sleep with him?' she heard them ask. 'Well, you have to when there's a war on,' she’d replied.

And then there was that Senator - Had a heart-attack whilst on the job. And died astride her dimpled milk-white knees!

Often she would find herself giving way to her inner nature after a few brandies - When naked as the moonlight Maud would wrestle with a young man in the garden in an inferno of love.

One doesn't last forever, she had always thought. And I'm not as young as I was. But knew a spasm of relief she was still desirable.

And as she grew older lust continued in fantasy and dream.

Dreams of flesh to be rubbed against flesh - and inserted into flesh.

And now as she sat alone in the garden, - little did they know Her freckle-encrusted cleavage was bursting - bursting with unspoken love.

Copyright 2007

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  • Kirin
    September 21, 2008

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    Nice piece of work. Very lonely. Vivid descriptions. I liked it very much. Thanks for entering. All the best in the contest!!


  • Reaver Greeters member
    June 12, 2008

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    Very well done. I got to know the character and enjoyed the way you structured it. I didn't get some of your grammar, but hey, it's your story, so have at it. Thanks for the entry. Well done.


  • Princess Peaches
    March 19, 2008
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    WEll done! Thanks for entering my contest and Good luck! <3 Princess Peaches


  • whichcraft Greeters member
    December 3, 2007

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    I think this was a good story using imagery. I'm not sure as to your sentence structure and the use of capitals and periods so that sort of threw me off a little. The reader is drawn to the feelings of your character.


  • Taboo Pixie
    October 10, 2007

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    Pretty interesting. It was written very nicely. not your typical idea of a feel good story, but great job.


  • Rosemary silver member
    October 9, 2007

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    Nice story

    The story showed good insight into those who are aging, but still have desires and memories to keep them alive and warm.


  • Midnightmare
    July 8, 2007
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    not bad, not bad, not bad at all. although this was a poetry contest...
    lol anyway i will still comment. hehe.
    i liked the imagery you created with your words... i was imagining myself there with her... well done on that.
    thanks for entering... =]


  • illegalfairy
    April 12, 2007

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    This was really beautiful. I just loved the way you wrote it. i especially liked the lines:
    Often she would find herself giving way to her inner nature after a few brandies
    and
    One doesn't last forever
    I don't know why i like them so much, but they just stuck out in my mind. this was very good. thank you for entering the contest and giving me something good to read.


  • Chemical Imbalance silver member
    March 29, 2007

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    This was a very interesting piece. Your use of imagery pulls the reader in so they can feel the emotions of your work. Good job. Thanks for enterting the contest and good luck.


  • Gbanger
    March 24, 2007

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    Beautiful

    The whole feeling behind this poem is so perfect and the imagery is brilliant. I loved the ending.
    Pure genius.


  • asthray.heart
    March 21, 2007

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    This was amazing, did you write this on your own?
    The wording and the imagery was so beautiful and well described.
    I loved this, please tell me you made this

    Lady Madeline.

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