I don't know what I did wrong. I brought one rabbit back to my master, but he's mad at me. He said I'll never be a good dog.
The mean human in the pound says I'm going to the gas chamber if no one will take me soon. I don't know what that means, but it don't sound good.
I tried, I really did, but I'm afraid of that gun. It's so loud.
That mean human is back. He brought two more humans; the little one is pointing a finger at me.
I wish I knew what she was saying.
Another 100 word story...
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jeremy i love your short story
hay its me amanda we talked on yahoo boo. i love your story.
beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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aww this was good in kind of asad way if you no what i mean i love short storys and this hit the right spotgood job i did enjoy reading this
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