*The Night Part One*

December 20-2006. That day, my body was just so tired and weak. So aroung 6:00pm i told everybody that i was going to take a nap. I had it all planed out that day, that finally today i am going to be free. So i grabed the blade, the room started to spin, blood everywhere, my left arm becoming numb................I thought i had finally did it. But then all of the sudded i couldn't remember anything.

December 21-2006, 5:30am the next morning i woke and went over the cuts that i made the night before, then i had to hurry up and get ready for school. I feld like i was in my own world, that i was dead but really i wasn't. I couldn't breathe, the left side of my ribs felt like they were bruised. Everything was going by really slow. I kept having these flashbacks.
Flashbacks of days that i wanted to kill myself, or flashbacks of a chance for someone to kill me.........the night of out school bomb threat. God i was so pissed that it didn't go through...................Around 10:00am my principal came up to me and asked if he could talk to me, so we went and talked.....I told him everything and that just might of ruined my life.......................

This is part one and I'm going to tell you my life story in flashbacks okay.

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  • xXEndless-PainXx
    August 6, 2007
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    Wow I LOVE it!! I'm disappearing to read part2...
    Savvy
    oxox

    beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.


  • jtnbuck
    March 19, 2007

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    wow im sorry sorry you are a very talented writer never do the suside thing its not worth it even knowing you are a good writer this will take you far one day good job and be pround of your self for beinfg a great writer good job


    • EMOtionalDARKness17
      March 19, 2007
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      thanks after that happend and i didn't succed well i always tell myself why would it succed a second time if it didn't work the first time then really its not my time. Thanks again