Lower heavens

a great many people had been chased

into a chamber by angels of the lower heavens

the room was packed full with

this poor huddled mass of tired people.

A man wearing a black sweatsuit

with white stripes.

walked up and was lifted onto a platform

he said," It is wrong to cause starvation,

and it is wrong to cause famines for profit."

"We apologize for the overcrowded classroom"

The wall they had been shoved through began to close.

Screams and cattle prods flashing

and then the wall came to rest with a gentle click.

silence.

The man turned to one of the horrors

who was an angel of the lower heavens and said,

"hey,pick a number between 1 and 10"

"seven" said the horror.

"cool ,Do not open this door for seven years"

said the man in the black sweatsuit.

he then yawned and stretched and said,

"you guys hungry,how about we take a break

and get some lunch.I could go for a lobster tail

and some fries.How about you ?"

the horrors laughed and the man did too.

then they all went to alice's restaurant

and had lunch.

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  • Hopeh
    March 18, 2007
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    That was....nice