Everyone ran into the ice. "SKATE SKATE!" they all cheered. Millions of people sat top watch. Everyone clapped and cheered when the 1st Team skated to the ice. The 2nd Team came. "Why cant we wear our own uniorm?" asked the blue team tp their coach.
They were too busy talking the other team was winning. "Holly COW WE ARE LOSING! EVERYONE QIEUT!" One team member yelled. Travis...was angry. "EVERYONE SHUT UP!!" she called. Everyone was silent. They all ran and tried to win, but the other team was winning first. "This is awful, awful!" Travi called. She put her head on her hands. Then she won! They won! But how wdid Travi's team won?
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- Skating by travis34dietC.
500 points, ended May 25, 2007, 2 entries
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for some reason this was hilarious!!
other than a few spelling errors it was good
by 'skating' i didn't mean hockey, i meant 'synchronized skating' (sorry, not a lot of people know what that is).
so this wasn't exactly what i was looking for for this contest but still good! very entertaining!
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i knew i could make you laugh!!!!
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Stacey is just a kid, dont push it.
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i didn't mean for my comment to seem mean. sorry if it did.. i liked this story
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