Jason, moved across the way from his new found love intrest.1
In a one bedroom apartment, he could keep a close eye on Nadia from there2
he could see when she came and went, and if she brought men back to her3
place. Jason set up a telescope to spy on her. He even started breaking4
into her place, to see how she lived, smelled her perfumes, looked5
through her panty drawers and looked through her trash, he even peeped6
in her refridgerator and cubbords to see what see ate. He was in awww of7
her and completely consumed by her. Although He could never meet her8
face to face, he still wondered about if he should meet her.9
When she came home, he was waiting for her to sign on, so he could have10
his time with her. Jason deceided to bug her phone line to listen to her11
talk. He even went as far as calling her and posing and a telamarketer. 12
Just to chat with her. Jason deceided to even follow her on some days,13
that way he could know her every move.14
What did you think? Please comment!
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oh good, this one continued. if only it were a bit longer but I am greedy that way. I'm really enjoying the stalking aspect of this one.
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still good, creepier and creepier by the entr
Still good, exactly like stalkering people (not that I would know uhh cough cough), but I have to say again, this really doesn't seem like a screenplay. Although, when you're done, I could turn it into one (I think it would need some dialogue, and that what I'm best at :-D) -
Gah!!! Intense
Jeez...I'm actually scared now...still wanting to read more though
I feel bad for her. She doesn't even know! Gah! The dramatic irony in this piece is killing me! Excellent job! Keep it coming!
Kamilah
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'AnnD,
sorry to confuse you, but he did move into her complex, and he does live right across the way, she lives in building I and he lives in building J, thanks for the comment' -
ok you have me confused. in part one. you say 'he moved in to her apartment complex' doesnt that mean in the same building... because in part 2 you state.'Jason, moved across the way from his new found love intrest. In a one bedroom apartment, he could keep a close eye on Nadia from there he could see when she came and went, and if she brought men back to her place. Jason set up a telescope to spy on her.'
would that not suggest that he was livingin a building opposite her??
I admit a more than true situation.
an interesting read.
Ann
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This is so awesome, I hope you will write more.
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What a freak.
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This was really good I like how you are juet puting this little story together he sounds very odd in this you will have to let me know when you start to work on the rest of this I am into it now so yeah
great work on this lots of love Robin...aka SH
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o.m.g.
just, wow, ok, wow. WRITE MORE MAN!!!!!
dude, just, wooooooow!!!! O.O
sc00ter
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