The Leprechaun

"Fiddely diddely, catch and riddle me! Quick, or I'll be gone! Fiddely diddly, catch and riddle me! I'm a leprechaun!"
That was the little song that was stuck inside my mind. It was stuck there alongside the man I had seen singing it, a wee man, barely 6 inches tall. He was dressed in green and had a little orange beard. The word leprechaun sprung to mind long before he mentioned it in his song. As soon as he saw me, he ran away, and was gone in seconds.

I was told about the leprechauns and their gold back when I was a little boy. Of course I had never considered it to be true, that was, until I saw the little man. They say that if you'd catch a leprechaun, he'd grant you a wish. Plus, he would always give you his gold... If you'd catch him, that is. But unfortunately, the leprechauns seemed to dissapear whenever they were seen. They were said to be masters of magic, and one should approach them carefully.

Two years went by betweet my first and second meeting with the little leprechaun. I immediately saw that it was the same one, and I was determined to catch him. I was out walking in the woods when I saw him again. It was late, and it was getting dark outside. He was singing, and it was the song that led me too him. He danced around a small fireplace, and sung the same song I had heard two years earlier.
"Fiddely diddely, catch and riddle me! Quick, or I'll be gone! Fiddely diddly, catch and riddle me! I'm a leprechaun!"

I waited behind some trees for many hours. The leprechaun danced and sung his song for a long time, until he finally fell asleep. When he was asleep, I slowly approached him. I went as close as I could, and then I threw myself against him. I caught him in my hands, and he woke up with a surprised look upon his little face. But in only seconds, he turned into a small frog. The frog in my hands was slippery, and managed to jump out of my grip. While still in the air, the frog transformed into a little bird, and flew away. I stood there watching the bird, and I could clearly hear it singing.
"Fiddely diddely, catch and riddle me! Quick, or I'll be gone! Fiddely diddly, catch and riddle me! I'm a leprechaun!"

Author notes

Made for the 'An Irish Tale' contest =)
The tune that the leprechaun sings is taken from the song 'The Leprechaun' by The Masterless Men =)

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  • Jennywinnie
    March 16
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    I love the little riddle you made up. Very cute!

    Good luck in my contest


  • tonialoise
    December 28, 2008

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    This was cute and well written. I really liked how the leprechaun escaped. Yeah that little diddy can work it's way into your head, especially if you imagine a squeaky little voice singing it.


  • Delfishie
    August 12, 2007
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    heh

    This is cute. I enjoyed reading it.

    The only suggestion I can think to make is that maybe you could give the protagonist a better reason for wanting to capture the leprechaun? So that we understand him better?

    Although if I had a song stuck in my head for two years, I guess I'd want to capture the singer, too. ;-)


  • Kelander
    August 7, 2007
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    Loved the little song, very catchy,lovely little story.

    Kel


  • Andy Stephenson gold member
    August 6, 2007

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    Good Story

    I really like the little leprechaun's song. It's cute. So your main character was seeing and trying to catch leprechauns? Never seen one in person myself. This is a cute little story. Thanks for entering our contest.

    Andy


  • travis34dietC
    March 22, 2007

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    cute! i like the song "Fiddely diddely, catch and riddle me! Quick, or I'll be gone! Fiddely diddly, catch and riddle me! I'm a leprechaun!"
    nice job!


  • SageSyren Greeters member
    March 19, 2007

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    Cute. 'ahhhh the wee ones are slipperly little devils and the mayhem and destruction they can cause. Don't forget to put out little something for them or ya might be a getting an egg or two cracked against ya house.' That from my grandma
    ~*Brooke*~


  • jtnbuck
    March 19, 2007

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    haha I loved this good job it was very good i loved it i just dont no what else to say it was just good keep up the good work i cant wait to reed more of your storys


    • Drac
      March 19, 2007
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      Hehe, this is not exactly my best piece of work But thanks for liking it


  • sodancewithsoda silver member
    March 19, 2007

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    Haha! The song reminded me of Little Mouse was that intentional???
    I found this cute Short and really cute Too bad we don't have cute "elementals" in this country The leprechaun Filipino counterpart doesn't sing, run away and stuff, he sits on a mound of dirt and casts nasty stuff on people

    This needs a sequel, Mads! I need to know what happens to the guy - will he start shooting birds down? Or hunting ALL frogs? haha, NEVER throw yourself on a leprechaun.. it just.. doesn't look right

    Haha, anyway, thanks for sharing this
    P.S. Dad is right about the betweet you are on sodamode!

    • Drac
      March 19, 2007

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      Hehe, I hadn't really heard Little Mouse when I wrote this, but I guess I just like silly little songs

      Anyway, I did not like this story myself
      It was totally crap in my eyes
      Just really wanted to enter that contest with a short story of a leprechaun

      And, hehe, your leprechaun counterpart sounds, haha, weird?
      We have out own version too, but they are just boring

      And well... I don't expect making a sequel, I'll rather just leave it to your own imagination Hehe, throwing yourself on leprechauns is useful if you want to catch them... they are so tiny

      Hehe, yup, but I let the betweet stay... sounds like a nice word

      Thanks for your comment Rachel

      • sodancewithsoda silver member
        March 19, 2007
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        WHy didn't you like this? x.x
        I think this perfectly showed how versatile you are as a writer You can write romance, gore, comedy... and a short story that borders on children's stuff

        see? talented!

        Hehe, ok, keep betweet then
        welcome, Mads ^_^

        • Drac
          March 19, 2007
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          Hehe, I didn't like it beause.. It was plainly bad written, wasn't it?
          And yeah, it was made with a childish tone, but that still doesn't justify crappy writing

          Hehe, but thanks alot for all the support Rachel!

  • culvert cracker
    March 18, 2007

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    Good

    I really like this one. This story has a bit of a ting to it, something more formidable than I'm used to. You have a great way of keeping your style appealing to your readers. Kudos, I suppose...it was very well written.

    Signed,
    Culvert


  • Lizz Emm
    March 18, 2007
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    lol this was cute! A major difference than other pieces I've read from you! ^^;

  • Brent
    March 18, 2007

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    Hahaha, you said "betweet" Sorry, that amused me. Like this story. But I think it needs a sequel where you catch the leprechaun and eat him. Or get your revenge some other way. Those slippery little bastards...


  • Mel-the-Believer
    March 18, 2007

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    I liked that. Very cute. Thanks very much for entering. Good luck. God Bless!


  • Your Anything
    March 18, 2007
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    I liked it and im also irish so i give 2 thumbs up!.


  • Stacey V
    March 18, 2007
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    Oh! Asorable picture!

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