Spider Cat 1 not finiushed

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The owl and rat tried their best to save the poor cat, but they were not fast enough to stop the truck 'ANIMAL EXPERIMENTERS', and they watch in fear as the cat was driving away, to be killed.

Meanwhile, I was in the couch with my 99 cats watching TV. I had magic. I made my cats talk. I also made my cats have powers. The ones that are good for each personality my cat had, I will tell you.
Black Cat: Bat Cat
Thunder Fluffygirl: Wonder Cat
???: Spider Cat

I was on to the new spider cat! Who? I would need one more cat.I was guessing what name for my new cat. 2

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The cat that was taken had a first experiment. It was a blood test. Oh!! 8

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After that, they locked him in a cage getting another animal, a kangaroo was taking a test with pain. The cat's orange and yellow fur was straight.10

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Then I looked at all my cats and counted. 97? Where were my 3 other cats!?18

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 I looked pale and worried. "BAT CAT! SUPER CAT! ICE CAT!" I called. No one answered. "Did you see them?" I asked my cats. "Yes", said Wonder Cat, "They are-um-sleeping in  your bed, aga-ai-again".20

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I ran to my room seeing Super Cat, Bat Cat, and Ice Cat sleeping in my bed. "Phew", I sighed. Flying Kitty Torch turned to fire at night and flew and wrote HELLO AND GOOD NIGHT with his fire in the sky. I laughed and smiled. My mom was in the kitchen cooking, while I was cooking 22

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  • Slyder
    March 26, 2007

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    A tiny arithmetic error: "I was in the couch with my 99 cats", "I looked... and counted. 97? Where were my 3 other cats!?" Three cats missing from 99 should be 96. An interesting write that I'll look for once you've finished it.

    beginning: 4, language: 5, plot: 4, dialog: 3, characters: 3.


    • Sunless Spirit
      April 6, 2007
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      She wont finish it. Sorry. Wanna know why?
      I am Stacey V too. But there is a problem with my password I wont be abel to finiishe it.