Chapter 1
Hilary wasnt your average girl she was a very unique teenage girl you can call her Hil she believes in all the stuff thats right and she stands up for herself and people around her and fights against popularity at school she is a supergirl she fights against what every high school student wishes that would stop
A Girl named Perkinton was a 14 year old girl who was very popular in school and she is a cheerleader and she was a little mean to the shy people in her year she had 3 other friends called Katie,Mandy and Tiffany then Hil walked up to her once when she was laughing at a girl she said "Excuse me, Perkinton why are you laughing at her?"
Then she stared and said "I dont think you will have noticed,but i'm popular"
And Hil said "And in case you hav'nt noticed Zap! she zapped them away to a english teacher
Then Hil walked up to other people and chatted to them everyone cheered and clapped for Hil then she went to her lessons
Then she met with her friends Magic Millie and Amazing Abby then the love of her life Mario O'Leon came up to her and said "Hey Hilary that was amazing"
"Thanks a lot it was a little dumb saying that to Perkinton"
"No it wasnt it was cool "
"But...didnt you?" Said Hil
"Oh yeah we broke up"
"So what have you been upto?" Asked hil
"Nothing just English, Math , Science and social studies" Mario said laughing
"Well ok why did you break up with perkinton?"
"Oh yeah.."
"No tell me...Mario you know that you can tell me " said Hilary
"Well its hard to explain..when you were on holiday we broke up and it sort of ended up like we didnt want to be together"
"Oh im so sorry" Hilary gasped
"No im glad...what happened was we were together and she was getting all wrapped up in her popularity so i broke up with her and then she cried for a little while and i was thinking i shouldnt of done it and just then i saw her with Will Roen"
"Awww..."
"No I am really glad i mean no one really liked her anyways not even me "
"What?" Hil said
Hil Looked very confused
"Why did you go out with her then?"
"She paid me $15 to go out with her"
Then Mario and Hil sat down at a table availiabe
"So your saying you took the money and just agreed to that
pathetic deal?"
He nodded and smiled
Wanna know what you think
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POSITIVE COMMENT
Wow. This was a really creative piece you have here, and I loved how your MC saved the day. I think that this could be longer. Loved the names for her friends "Magic Millie" and "Amazing Abby"...really cool.

