So this is it... This is where I've come to be after eight years... [pauses]EIGHT YEARS of waiting for a man who doesn't even remember my name. I was stupid to even think that he could come to love someone like me. He was the most handsome guy since eighth grade. Brown hair that was almost black... Eyes so green, they could be part of the sea... He was perfect. Even his deep voice was flawless. I don't even know how I could have loved him so. 1
I waited for him... I waited for us... And still... I was never noticed. Maybe if I- I did... Something different... Maybe he would-2
Oh get a hold of yourself, Chris! He was never yours and you know it! I gotta pull myself together and move on.3
But what if I actually left him alone? Would I have been happier? What would've happened? I just can't help but think that if something was different back then, I would be-4
OH JUST SHUT UP AND LET THINGS BE! HE'S DEAD AND NOTHING'S GOING TO CHANGE THAT! GET OVER IT AND MOVE ON! 5
Okay, just calm down and get a hold on your emotions, Chris. Everything will work out one way or another... But what if things never do work out? What if I'm destined to wait forever for him? I can't let it be this way...6
[pulls grabs gun from bedside table]7
This is the only way out... I'll see you soon Ron... [pulls trigger slowly]8
BANG!9
[falls to floor, gasping for breath]10
I... guess... I was waiting for... [silence]11
Author notes
I tried my best. Sucks though...
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Very tragic. But, somehow I like tragic endings. Well written.=)
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sweetie, this is really good writing for you! keep up the writing your book, I see great things happening for you love ya babygirl! XOXO mom
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It doesnt suck, but it does look as if you were trying to in some way mimmic another monolouge on here. Im not sure what it's called but its very, very simular, the argument in the conscience. Nonetheless I liked it.
Good luck
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