Bismallah! Johann finds his sister is a vampire

Johann came back to the town where of birth, to learn his sister too, had returned with husband and children. She'd married son of an old family. Incest? Johann noticed his sister hadn’t aged since he’d last seen her, in bloom of youth.

When people started disappearing, Johan wondered, like anybody else. Then he found his sister -- her whole family, had become vampires. Violence. He learned this was inherited, he might have in him to be one. But he still had a choice.

Johann became vampire hunter. He killed his sister & whole family. Hardest thing. Mercy! Thank G-d!

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A contest entry

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  • Jinxgirl
    March 17, 2007

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    lol, this is like a very condensed summary of a longer novel. which i understand of course for this contest. I think you should definitely expand on this for your own self though.