They sat in silence. Her soft green eyes met his hard gray ones. His hand reached for hers, brushing her knee in the process. "Come away with me," his voice was soft and melodious, "I will keep you safe." Tears began to break loose from their confinement, she had wished to hear these words for some time. She shook her head yes, words were lost to her.
A harsh voice shattered their peaceful meeting. It was her master. She grimaced. She looked over at the handsome boy with a look of longing. She stood, he still had her hand. He wouldn't let her go, "You don't have to go back, you can come with me," he looked up at her with concerned eyes. He hated seeing the new bruises that showed up every time he saw her. She turned her head towards her Master's voice. He would be very angry with her if she did not return soon. She gulped, he had nearly killed her the last time she had made his temper rise. Her eyes met with his once again, she had to go. She smiled weakly at him and turned to leave, his hand slowly slid from her own.
Author notes
I got bored...
A contest entry
- I'll Read Anything by Kitzwa.
200 points, ended April 7, 2007, 50 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest - This is a little random... by Taylor Renee.
130 points, ended April 8, 2007, 97 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Ok so you got bored, dad gum it Krysa! Add more to your lil thingies!!!! -
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-giggles- i did make a second part... x.x i need to start on a third... unless i have a third, then i need to start on a 4th part...
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I agree, I hope you get bored a lot. This story is definately a finalist.
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thanks! ^__^
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Good for you Krystal! It's very nice. Poor woman. Anyway, trying working on it some more. I think it would turn out good.
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hmmmm.... i might continue on it laters..
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May you get bored more!
I enjoyed this a lot!!! It's very short, but the implications of the words, the dialogue, the bruiese... wow..
This is already beautiful as it is - I think this story is well worth developing And if or when you do, please contact me, because I would love to know who this master is and IF the girl would escape and just BE with the man who loves her
Thank you for sharing this and hope to read more from you!
Welcome to Storywrite ^_^
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I made a second part.
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I'll check it out
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Alrighty, will do if i ever decide to extend on this.
And Thanks ^_^
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I can really understand this short piece. It reminded me of a friend who was having some troubles with a partner. Very nicely written, and sometimes better writes come out of boredom
Hope you get bored more often, only so you write more shorts
beginning: 4, language: 4, plot: 4, ending: 4, dialog: 4, characters: 4.
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