"Mom and Dad are fighting again.Oh bother! I hate it when they fight! I hope that Dad doesn't hit Mom too hard this time because i don't like to see her blood. And she gets very sad. I think I should hide in the closet for a while and bring Teddie along. Mom still hasn't patched your eye from the last time , but i still love you all the same Teddie! Oh oh I don't believe that I forgot it's Treat Day! Uncle will be here any minute! Oh goodie! I'll get all the candies and cookies I want! But i hope Uncle won't be too rough on me! Sometimes it hurts a lot when he plays with me. I don't like it when he puts his hands in my pants. He hurts me and it hurts even more when he puts his.. his..what is that thing called? I should ask Mommie. But if I did then Uncle will stop giving me candy and cookies and I just love those cookies! They are just sooo good and Mon always tells me that we are too poor to buy those fancy ones and Dad hit me when i asked him. That hurt! But Uncle will give me all the cookies I want! I hope that he tell me to put make up again! I love to put makeup, but Mom won't let me! I look so pretty in makeup! Uncle loves it when I wear them. He must because he took so many pictures of me with makeup. Maybe he'll be in a good mood and not hurt me too much. He promised he won't after the blood last time, but I'm scared! I don't want to upset him". 1
The screaming ceased and all was quiet all over the house. A couple minutes later, a car halted in the driveway. A man went in the house and came back with a lovely five-year old and they both drove away. They stopped once around the corner to get some of those very good cookies that everyone seems to be raving about. Then the care drove on and another Treat Day was about to begin.2
Author notes
i thought it might be more perosnal if i let the little girl speak of what happned to her. there's no fancy words or imagery here. just the plain naked ugly truth!
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This was good. I mean it's soooo horrible with the whole her uncle raping her. Its just wrong. But yeah I liked this. Sorry it's taking me so long to judge the contest. I just don't have much time. But thanks for entering I'll do my best to judge it soon.
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im glad you like it!
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Oh my god!!! head whirling U pictured it all so wonderfully. well done. I cant seem to find the words to say more.
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unforgetable
okay now i'm ready to comment i wasn't ready to read this i realy didn't think you would write something like that nice job i realy love when you wrote"when he puts his.. his..what is that thing called?" i liked how you made us feel the innoscense of the child perfect work and i'll give it my best verdict ever : unforgetable ( for me thats like a perfect 10)
keep up the good work ....
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I'm shocked.
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that's exactly what i wanted from this story. i think we ignore these stuff and just bury them. that isn't solving much and we really need to get pervs like that asshole!
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OMG this is so depressing and yet so enthralling. This is an awesome write. I don't really like the topic of the story because when i think about how people really do that it just makes me hate society and people. But i must say you did an awesome job.
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