A Thousand and Two Feet

“Thousands of feet pound Manhattan’s pavement every day“, Craig said under his breath, as he lifted his right foot, "why did it have to be mine"?

Craig Rogers, the man most likely to be a soap star but a stock broker? Tall, dark and handsome didn't sell alot of stocks he could gaurentee that. Living most of his thirty five years on the upper west side of New York City until he married Denise and moved to Long Island, hating the commute into the Big Apple but even more the time it stole away from his son and daughter. He continually reminded himself he was doing it for reasons other than making a living. Only his wife and mother knew the secret he held.

The American flag pin now in pieces, belonged to fellow Wall Street mogul, a retired marine who only traded aluminum here on Wall St., five cents per can. His groans as plastic crunched under Craig's feet seemed to echo off the empty lapel his shaking hand covered reverently. The red, white and blue pieces would soon be swept away. Stars and stripes were no match for March’s cold, unpredictable winds, or the steel eyes that bore into him from the tall giants in concrete suits. Just a few of the formidable enemies the old man chose to face day in and day out.

Craig's eyes met the tortured glance of the veteran, unable to resist looking at a leg that was not his own. Another trade executed, except this one on a street in Hanoi, freedom for what could have been. Tears threatened Craig Rogers yet another morning.

Awkwardly he handed over his own own breakfast to the one time defender of life and liberty, hoping the gesture turning into a daily ritual would keep him in good graces. Steam escaped from the top of the brown bag, with it the aroma of scrambled eggs and ham. The old man ate quickly, stopping only to gulp the warm coffee that the handsome young man also surrendered. For a moment there seemed to be recognition in his weary brown eyes, but no sooner that the light went on, it went back out. Craig slipped a few dollars in his worn pocket while breathing a silent prayer that the old soldier would soon return home from the war. All he received back was a nod before he continued to steer his vintage Gristede cart slowly down the busy sidewalk, annoying those in a hurry to get around him.

Craig hesitated only a moment before heading towards Market Street where the offices of his employer, Wagner and Wagner were located. Compared to the larger brokerages, his was perhaps the smallest but run well and considered a stepping stone while learning the ropes. But he found it difficult to concentrate on the business at hand as he sat before his cluttered desk.
He didn’t need to look at his watch to tell him he was late or stomach to growl to announce how hungry he was. Yet he refused to complain as his thoughts once again drifted to the morning’s unfortunate sequence of events, and the man he remembered building dreams with, calling him dad, the bravest soldier he knew, who always did love his ham and eggs.

Author notes

The first of three stories - will add the other two within a few days. THis one is in war fiction catagory the others will be romance and childrens.

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  • Kari gold member
    March 30, 2007

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    This is a very emotional and good story. I enjoyed reading it a lot. The best of luck to you n the contest.


  • Barbara Moderators member
    March 29, 2007

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    A nice touching story, told with rich imagery and description.

    Thank you for entering, and good luck with the contest.


  • Cyber Artist Moderators member
    March 25, 2007

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    A touching story in a world were we often don't stop and don't know the story behind the faces that pass us by daily. Its been a fantastic challenge its not easy creating a story in the confines of a word count and giving it the life. Sometimes I think stories have a life of there own and dictate who long they are to be. But you have risen to the challenge creating three wonderful stories rich in diversity and solid in plot. Its easy to say it could have been expand more, and perhaps one day when your under presser from your agent to produce another best seller you might remember these little stories and revisit the characters. I hope you enjoyed the challenge as much as we have reading the stories best of luck in the contest
    Cyberartist


  • Manea
    March 18, 2007
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    This is a very good story. When the man, Craig, is first introduced, it seems as though he is but stock broker, but at the end you see that he really is a kind man, who is always there to give his breakfast to the man. Great story, defiantly has potential.


  • eyeambaldman
    March 16, 2007
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    Nice twist at the end. Personally, I'd like to see more here. Maybe expand and add some dialogue between the main character and the war veteran? Just a suggestion.

    Good story. I think with some editing and possible expansion this could be very good. Excellent start so far!

    beginning: 4, language: 3, plot: 4, ending: 5, dialog: 1, characters: 4.

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