I am a young lady indeed,
but to study i had to change my breed.
I left my house single
but fell in love on the way..
I met a friend of mine
and toghether we used to dine..
This man thought i was a man
but the truth only i knew..
Even though i was male he still loved me.. then too
A few months later my arrival at home was due,
i got on the train, said bye Kuaiji.
Our relationship had streghtened in the few months that we knew one another..
When i went home i was a man again,
Kauiji had a life of his own..
He never knew i was a women till the day i died and him came to pay his respects...
At the grave when he arrived i felt him stand beside,
my tomb split in half and beside me he dived..
The life we missed on earth
we shared down in the grave..
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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wow do you ever stop making good poems?
this was great yet another good one cant wait to read more so get on the ball ok
you are vey good writer for being young you have a ture talent.

