Finally, its Spring Break. A time of rest, relaxation, and of course, parties. There were so many things from the previous grading period I wanted to get off of my mind. Fights with friends, messy break ups, horrible Valentine's days. Sometimes being a teenager is more trouble than it needs to be.
I looked over at my cell phone at the exact time it started ringing. Its so freaky when I do that. As I expected, it was Samantha. Poor kid just broke up with her boyfriend of a year and a half. Just in time for spring break too. Oh well, spring is the time of rebirth, maybe this will be the case for both our love lives.
"Hey sweetie, how you doin?" I asked as sympathetically as possible.
"Just fine. You wanna go shopping for somethin to wear to Patrick's party? I'm so tired of my clothes." Wow. She's still going to Patricks? They just broke up. I see the next few days won't be easy.
"Uh, you sure you still wanna go? I mean, you just broke up with him. We can go see a movie or something, maybe go man-hunting."
"No, I'm goin to Patrick's"
"Well, okay then. I'll be at your house in thirty minutes."
This is going to be a long week. I hope Sam remembers shes not the only one going through emotional crap right now. As I thought this, I subconciously looked at the broken heart picture frame sitting by my bed. I still love you Zach, even if you don't love me.
A few hours later I found myself sitting in a dressing room trying to console a teary eyed Samantha. A mountain of clothes on the floor. She needs to learn to not be so emotional. I mean, come on. He's just a guy, and she's only seventeen.
"Sweetie, your not fat. None of these look bad on you. Don't you realize I could kill to have your body?"
This sentiment was true of course. My curvy hour glass shaped body has been my curse since 6th grade. It can be seen in two views: trashy or fat. If only I had Sam's slim, lean frame.
"Dude, I WANT a body. I have nothing. I am not claiming to be fat, I'm claiming to be skinny. Too skinny. I have nothing. All these clothes look flat on me."
"Well, I don't know what to tell you then"
What seemed like hours later, we were heading home. In the back were identical bags with mostly identical tops. Baby-doll halters, one pink and orange, one blue and lime. Now to get ready for the party.
"Does this look wild?"
"No, does my hair look too big? Its all about the volume."
"No, your good."
This is what a day in the life of Lydia and Samantha is like. We couldn't live with out each other. Or so I thought.
At the party, there was all the usual forms of entertainment. Drunken teenagers looking for attention with crude games and dancing, random shout matches, flirting, and cheating.
"Hey, Lydia, isn't it?"
I turned around to see who was talking and was delightfully impressed. The new boy I'd been thinking about for a while, Adam. Tall and slightly large, given the current fashion trends. According to fashion experts, guys are supposed to be tiny wusses, but not Adam. He was perfect.
"Yeah, Adam, right? I've seen you around. Having fun?"
"Yeah, I guess...you want a drink?"
I told Sam where I was going and she gave me the thumbs up. Tonight may be better than I was expecting. Of course, I'd have to watch out for Patrick. The idiot didnt realize that once you break up with somebody, thats it.
____To Be Continued.....
Author notes
This is part of the Drama of Lydia and Samantha...I will continue it soon.
A contest entry
- StoryWrite New Members Contest March 2007 by SW Greeters.
350 points, ended April 9, 2007, 11 entries
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A well done story that I think brings back memories to us all. Yay for the drama years. Lol, sometimes I still have them

In your first paragraph, "its" should be "it's"
I didn't really notice any other typos. There may be some but I didn't notice them so they are obviously not very distracting
The story catches the interest and had me wanting to turn the page to a next chapter. You also have me looking forward to find out the meaning of "or so I thought". The way it is interjected at the end of its paragraph seems to indicate something is coming up that might change the "we couldn't live without each other" way of thinking.
The only part I didn't quite get was the very end. Why would Lydia have to watch out for Patrick. Could be she would be watching to take up for her friend Samantha, but it isn't clear. Perhaps that is something that will be answerred in the continuation of the story
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Good Effort
This is a great start for a series. The characters you've introduced are human and lovable. You have a fluid writing style and welcome to Storywrite
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Excellent
You did a good job with this story, your characters are beliveable. I look forward to read the end.

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Ah, the good old days *tries not to do a flash back* Well written and alot of people on here can relate as Soda said... I know i can ^-^
Good Job.
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Thanks for entering and good luck in the contest
Boy do I remember those days. Feels like a million years ago. lol

~*Brooke*~ -
Reading this reminded me too much of my own teen days, filled with drama and what most adults would call "trivial"
My own bestfriend and I had a lot of conversations similar to this, including her latest heartache, weight issues, insecurities about looks... I think most of everyone could relate with this

There are a few minor misspellings (like your - you're...
) but nothing major, so you can easily correct them and everything will be a-ok 
Good luck with the contest and hope to read more from you!
P.S. Welcome to SW
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