Prologue from Part One: I keep walking rereading the note in my mind until I come to the bar. As I walk in I take off my hood and let my long hair flow to my back. I look around looking for the perfect match, scanning and scanning I don’t see him yet. I have to search for a while, but my succubus instincts tell me he’s here. I keep searching. Alas! I’ve found him, he’s at the pool table. I walk over towards him and walk right by him gently brushing my hand against his thigh. And I walk to the other side. I look down and slightly up until our eyes connect. I flash a shy smile and let my head slowly upward to reveal my neck. He stops as my spell is set upon him with a glance, I can see the fire of desire in his eyes…
Part Two:
I don’t know what attracted me to this woman, perhaps her creamy eyes, slim figure, long raven hair. But all of a sudden I was drooling over this chick like a puppy. I didn’t wanna come on too hard, so I just looked at her slightly and was finishing my game. It was as if she was waiting for me. One minute I was knocking the eight ball in the hole and when I looked up she was gone. I got mad as I slammed down the pool stick and turned around and saw her behind me. She had an angelic glow from her like she was from Heaven. Then another kinda look like she knew what I wanted and she wanted it too.
“Hey.” She said and smiled, revealing white perfect teeth.
“Hi,” I replied, wanting to say more, but my heart was beating so hard. She walked closer to me and rested her hands on my hips, I put my hands on her back, as she leaned in to kiss me. I haven’t even said two words to this chick and I’m already making out with her. She pulls away and walks over to the table and sits in the seat in one swift motion. I follow her hurriedly like I’m her husband.
“What’s your name?” She asks letting the heel of her shoe slide up and down my leg.
“Adam. What about yours?” I try to talk over the music.
“Cassandra, but you can call me Cassie.” She says and smiles slightly.
“Ok, Cassie what brings you here so early in the morning?” I glance down and see a wedding ring on her hand. She shifts and makes a fist with her left hand and stretches it back out and the ring is gone.
“Just looking for a little conversation. You?”
“Ok, excuse me if I’m being bothersome,” I stop as I feel her right hand start rubbing up and down on my thigh, “but didn’t I see a ring on your left hand just a minute ago?” I look into her white glowing eyes. She gives me a piercing look that makes me forget what I said until she gave me an answer.
“What does that matter, that’s not what you want with me. And you know the more you can’t have me, the more you want me.” She said.
“I know, what do you say we get out of here?” I thought carefully about this woman, mysterious woman, I know zero about. But for some reason I trust her.
“I was wondering what was taking you so long. We can go back to my place. But we’ll have to walk.” She whispered.
“Can’t we just take a cab?” I wondered not really wanting to walk anywhere.
She looked at me again and I knew what she had in mind, for the way there. She stood up and leaned over the table, and whispered in my ear, “Come on, I’d love to walk with you.” And she planted lightly a kiss on my earlobe. It sent chills running through my body cold. She got up and I stood and we walked out hand in hand. She took me to the back alley’s, when we started making out I thought she was gonna take me right then and there. Then she stopped and said, “We have to wait.”
“Ok, since you’re torturing me enough let me ask you a question. Why do you wear a cape? I could hold it for you.” I reached for it and she stopped dead in her tracks and turned. She looked at me with the deadliest look I’ve ever seen.
“I would very much like it if you didn’t touch my cape.” She said in a low growling voice. It’s scared me, because it got me turned off and an alarm went off that told me to leave. She looked at me with those eyes, and slammed me against the wall hard and kissed me so passionately I thought I was going to melt. She took my hands and guided them to her butt and I gladly massaged it. She pulled away with such desire I felt it lingering in the alley. “I’m sorry but when someone implies or touches my cape it gets personal. Don’t hate me?”
She looked so sad I almost gave her a hug, but the kiss had me alert. “That’s ok. So how far do we have to go?”
“Just around that corner… Race ya!” She started running so fast I didn’t even see her. So I started sprinting fast when I rounded the corner we were at the edge of the woods and she wasn’t anywhere in site. The only place she could’ve ran was into the woods. I ran to the opening and ran a little ways in and turned around and I saw her behind me. The sun was almost all the way in the sky, so the sky was pink. “You beat me!” She said and laughed. She ran up to me and I caught her in my arms.
“Very strong arms.” She said and kissed me. I lifted her down and she slowly eased me towards the back of the tree. And we made out I was kissing her on her collarbone when she gripped me tightly and I felt a sharp pain on my neck and it hurt. It felt as if I was getting weaker and weaker, then I realized she was drinking my blood…
Author notes
This is the 2nd part to part one... DUH! But I'm gonna make a part 3 also.
Please tell me what you think
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Loved it..
I liked how you wrote from his point of view this time, I was really interested in finding out how she would catch him off gaurd to turn him into a vampire! -
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ya i was kinda skeptical on how to do it i think it turned out ok though
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your the best and I love you baby
beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.



