Escursionisti Di Notte (Travelers of Night) - Part One

“Master, the sun’s coming, are you ready to go underground?” I suggested. The Escursionisti Di Notte (Travelers of Night) Clan only walked at night and stalk like grim reapers during the day. Me being a vampire succubus, I’m usually the one who goes to clubs to meet guys and transform them to expand our clan. My Master, Master Drake, is a vampire incubus, but not like he use to be.

“Yes, let me finish.” Drake replied. He was busy feeding from a female he picked up from the woods. When he finishes he slits his wrist and says, “Drink from me and live thousands of thousands of years, or die now.” She greedily drinks his blood. He tells me to lead the way as he carries her in his arms to the cave. I go over and fix my bed for her, today is the day of stalking, so I won’t be needing it. She will need plenty of rest. In six moons I will be teaching her the basics of being a vampire succubus. She will be the Mistress when Master Drake is ready to go and begin a new clan, I will find her a Master tonight. We have begun three clans already, we all meet in the pasture on the Pure Moon nights.

She lays there restless for a while, but I let her drink of my blood. So she will have the genes of the succubus vampire. Then she settles down and sleeps. Master Drake is already in his bedding when I turn around and tells me he’s ready. I walk over and say, “Have vengeful dreams tonight, Master.” He smiles at me as I drop down and kiss him full on the lips. He kisses me back just as much. Master Drake stands 6’2, 250lbs., with black hair, tan skin, and cream colored eyes. He’s stronger than the strongest animal, faster than the fastest animal, and handsomer than the handsomest man.

“Darling, you will always be my first and only love.” He says. I smile and slide the concrete top over on him to leave him to sleep. Me and Master Drake has been around for hundreds of years. He’s an incubus and I’m a succubus, we may get jealous, but in the end we are for each other. No matter what. He showed me everything I know and I love him so much, and he loves me. They say incubus’ and succubus’ cannot love because of what they are, but we still are human and have hearts like everyone else.

I go to the back of the cave to change into my usual black fishnet tights, black one piece attire, apply my lipstick, my black shoes, and my black cape. I swiftly and quietly walk out to make sure everyone’s sleep, I walk over to Master Drake’s bedding and plant a kiss and I love you on the top. Then I walk ever to the girl and kiss her on the forehead and cover her up and walk away gently. It’s daytime, even though the sun doesn’t really affect me I still dress appropriately for the occasion.

I run through the woods on my familiar path and glide through the treetops. When I reach the city I take the alleyways to a familiar bar every time I come out, but this time I see little spots were Drake has left clues to where to go and what to look for. We go to daytime bars. Nighttime bars are filled with trash.

I look in the hole in a building to find a letter Drake wrote to me:

My Dear Cassandra,

By now, I know I will be asleep. But I ask for you to find a male, tonight. Of the usual black hair, tall, dark eyes, and very handsome. For the woman I have tonight, will be a perfect match.

Every night I come out and have to do this, it feels as if I’m hurting you, My Love, I never would want to do this to you, if we were human. But this is what we are meant to do. I know me and you have talked many times before our love making and I’ve heard the hurt and deception in your voice when you say, “It’s ok, I understand.” But I know you do and it still hurts, it hurts me so much. But when we get our fifth clan together. We won’t have to do this any more, My Love, we can finally be together. You and I. I love you beautiful. I can’t wait Until our fifth clan, we’re almost there, Darling.

Love,

Drake

After I read that my heart thumped when he called me beautiful, I never knew he thought of me as beautiful. I am very desirable to humans, but to Drake I’m the same as when we met. I’m 5’8, slim at 120, pale skin, some say when they see me it’s as if I have a glow to my skin, long raven hair, cream colored eyes, and very mature body.

I keep walking rereading the note in my mind until I come to the bar. As I walk in I take off my hood and let my long hair flow to my back. I look around looking for the perfect match, scanning and scanning I don’t see him yet. I have to search for a while, but my succubus instincts tell me he’s here. I keep searching. Alas! I’ve found him, he’s at the pool table. I walk over towards him and walk right by him gently brushing my hand against his thigh. And I walk to the other side. I look down and slightly up until our eyes connect. I flash a shy smile and let my head slowly upward to reveal my neck. He stops as my spell is set upon him with a glance, I can see the fire of desire in his eyes…

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This is Pt. One in a series I will hope to continue. If you like I'll work on the 2nd one.

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  • nichtmich
    March 29, 2007
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    Creepy

    A very good vampire prologue and would make a good series, also. I see a few grammar errors like 'not like he use to be' instead of 'not like he used to be' or 'me and him' instead of 'he and I'. Nothing major You have effectively introduced your characters and the ending is just begging for a continuance! Best wishes in the comp.


  • Baka Demon
    March 22, 2007
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    *blinks*

    I really liked the detail in the story. ^^ But it was hard to understand for me. What seires is this from? If it isn't a series then WOW. This is good. I need more time to read the rest of the stories. ^^

    beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 4.


  • Violet Moodswing Greeters member
    March 12, 2007

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    Welcome to StoryWrite

    And thanks for your entry in the new members contest. I like the way you approach your topic. It keeps the attention with a bit of a twist. You might consider doing it in past tense rather than present tense, but that is just me. Sometimes when writing in present tense we have to use a lot of ing words, which can distract the eye a bit.

    Overall, I enjoyed reading it.

    Keep writing and best of luck in the contest.


  • Fairytale Princess
    March 11, 2007
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    Awesome!

    I really liked this story! I will continue red the series!

    beginning: 5, language: 4, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 4, characters: 4.


  • travis34dietC
    March 11, 2007

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    very intriguing! you should definitely continue this!! thanks for entering


    • blutiful01
      March 11, 2007
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      i hope too but part 3 isn't coming along so good no inspiration *sweat trickles down spine*


  • QueenWolf
    March 11, 2007

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    Interesting story you have here, well thought out and put together. Good luck in the contest.

    I think it could use just a touch more dialog but you have some good discription in it, well done.

    ~Princess~


  • crosscountry07 gold member
    March 10, 2007

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    good. seemed like it may have been more than 1000 words, but then again I'm sick and I have no clue what I'm even typing. Haha, no really this was quite good and I hope to see the second part to the series.


  • Nightscar
    March 10, 2007
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    sorry forgot the points oops

    beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.


  • Nightscar
    March 10, 2007
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    oh baby I LOVE IT SO MUCH and you too

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