“I’ll give you everything you ever dreamed of, ask for the world, and it’s yours, nothing will stop me,” he whispered softly into her ear before nibbling on it letting her know that all he said was true. An awkward silence filled the room, but was soon disrupted as she giggled hesitantly.
She wiped away her tears and forced a smile. “Then kill him,” she muttered through an intermittent of sobs, “kill him and I’ll be forever yours. Your slave if I must.” She abruptly stood and walked to the window placing her arms on the window sill then sighed, “It’s not like anybody would care if I was taken prisoner anyways, not like they ever notice my absence.”
“Come back to me,” he urged her, “I’ll do your bidding, but first tell me why you want him dead? Why so much blood spilled over one man?” He held her in his arms and ran his fingers through her hair.
“Because, he stole something dear to me, he stole it and watched as I squirmed underneath him, unable to breathe, until the last breath was released before I blacked out,” she commented in a monotone voice. “Just please,” she began to beg. She got down on her knees and looked up at him with her pleading big brown eyes, “Can you have it done?”
He sighed and gave in, “First thing tomorrow, I’ll have a hit out on the man; my men will not fail to carry out their mission. “Now, as for your part of the deal, this is what you must do,” he went down the list from the most important task to the least, her eyes began to dry up and a look of horror was all that was left on her face. He placed his hand gently on her shoulders, “I’m just playing m’dear. I wouldn’t make you do those things.”
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If you can think of a good title, let me know, thanks ^_^
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What the heck?
lol Whats that about Krysa? Explain to me the sorta spur of the moment with that one. And what did he list for her? lol Makes me think of Brett and how he'd say "Under five million and one conditions...condition one, follow condition two, condition two follow condition three and so on lol. Write some more to it. -
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Ummm.... i was sittin' on my bed listening to music when i wrote it, more than likely... and urm... idk/i forgot what he listed X.X and lol
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This is a very nice write.
I enjoyed the slightly light touch at the end, as it was quite a dark write.
A very interesting way of dealing with something so terrible.
A suggestion on title, hmm. How about 'The Deal'.? As that seems to be the topic. -
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Thanks, and hmm... that sounds a lot better than "Untitled" so i think will use it, thank you! ^_^
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No worries, you're welcome. Glad it works for you.
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Haha, the last part was kinda....eh...Her part of the deal? Yea...Adding humor kinda ruined it for me....But the beginning is good. I think I got what he stole from her...maybe...
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