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just getting started...well, not just , i've had this idea for several years... just never started writing....

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  • The-Golden-Phoenix
    January 14
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    where is the rest..dnt keep us in suspense...

  • malvadadiosa
    July 15, 2004
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    Ashley and ashley give it 2 thumbs up!!!

    This is going to be a start to a great story.I look forward to reading more of it.Keep up the good work.I am very interested.

  • Cemetery Rose
    May 25, 2004
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    So far so good!

    OoooOOOOooooooo I am intrigued! I want to know now! Its true you could go in so many directions with this! I think this is a good begining....but then again I dont know what is to come You have peaked my interest.....I can't wait to see what you write next! Honestly....friend blinders down....
    Peace and love
    Susan

  • whispernthedark
    May 23, 2004
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    thanks, I have one in mind, and am working on it. I want feedback if you don't like what's to come

  • Talia
    May 23, 2004
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    Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

    So many damn options within these few lines believe me, this could go in so many directions it is unreal. I can't wait to see what you actually do with this piece really.

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