OMNI organisatoin-

Chapter one

Lewin wiped the sweat off his face. He'd been skiing and was now walking down the stairs,to his department. Lewin shared a bedroom with his best friends, Kip and louis. they were in there kip on the bed watching TV,and louis trying on his new runners and ski coat.

Lois and kip looked up as soon as he opened the door.

" Where were you???" asked kip.

" Testing for a new mission... They want two more people. I have just singed in...Got a place." " Cool...I'm going to try out." kip said,exitedly. "what's the mission?" "there is a breifing there...its about whales in Japan. we act as...donno...go find out." Replied lewin,taking off his coat and plunking himself on the bed. " see ya" and Kip was gone. " hows Sara? " asked Lewin."cool' replied Louis. going on a mission to France with her tomorrow in the afternoon.

Kip,Louis and lewin were all members of the orphan OMNI organisation. It was a mission place where only strong,fit and healthy people went. Some of the missions were taking life risks.

***

Kip and louis were walking back from the mission tower. Kip had got a mission with Lewin to Japan, starting tomorrow. Kip really wanted to go to go on the Japanese high-speed train. He liked cars and mechanical things.

" Hi Lew" said Kip walking into the bedroom. Lewin was packing for the trip to japan. He'd been given some gadjets: a mobile only used to fasten the High-speed train if there was an emergecy,a little keyring to put on the inside of his jacket that you press a button and a mini dinner was set out on a tray...only got 20 meals for camping.

" I got the same gadgets as before" complained Lewin." gadgets?? Where is mine?' asked kip. " On the table' pointed Lewin. 'Come on lets get some sleep before tomorrow.'Lewin suggested. " I'll see you in the morning" louis said. " I'll go and see my sister,sara.'

"Right...'kip dreamly said" I'll see you when its time to rock and role.'" right' Louis frowned. " See you then."

Chapter two

The next morning something happened. BIG. Louis was running out of

his bedroom and slinked past Mr.Mounter and then he just tripped the teacher up. Simply just tripped the teacher up. Mr.mounter was straight sent to hospital and Louis was sent to the head master,straight away.

" you just tripped him up,broke both arms and legs fractured his finger and broke his collor bone?' said the Headmaster,angrily." yes sir,iam sorry."" i no just the thing pack up.' said the headmaster,smiling braoadly." your expelled' " What?" said louis." now come on no "buts" or "whats" and with that Louis left a note for kip and lewin and left for the nearest foster home. tears in his eyes.

" What's this?" said kip waking up. " A letter from louis." replied Lewin. "IT says... LOUIS EXPELLED!!!" " WHAT?" asked Lewin.

" That's impossible he was..." "The worst mission taker in the world" finished lewin smilling.

So that was it LOUis was expelled.

Chapter 3

It was Saturday. The only people outside were the Basic Test people. Kip was in bed,watching t.v. and lewin walked in.

"What doing?" asked lewin,junping on the bed.

"Laiseing around." replied kip,eyes glues to the t.v.

"I hear there is a new boy coming today,name is Harry Smith."

Lewin ssigheed. Wonder how Louis is going."

Suddenly the door flung open and in walked Jessica,Louis's friend.

"Where is Louis?" she shouted,face red.

"Um...He was expelled." they replied.

"WHAT?" answered Jessica.

"That blumin rascal!!" she screamed. Jess shut the door an stomped down the hallway.

"I heard...Louis broke up witth that rat.About time he did."

***

Sunday. Sunny. Lewin slept in. Kip crept down stairs to see he cook getting ready for breakfst. He snatched 23 bag of chips. 3 cokes and some FIZZ THE FIZZ. He smiled at his pig behaviour.

Lewin caught him sneaking up the stairs. Smiled and pointed at a new boy coming towards them. Kip hid the goods.

"Hi" said the boy. "Hi" Lewin nudged Kip. "Oh...Hi" Kip said mouth full with a bag of chips.

"My name is Harry Smith. I was sent to find my way to the boys' changing room. I am meant to budge in and sleep with Hengry Davididson." Lewin and Kip both smiled at each other. "Come with us. Hengry is horrible. He is always farting. Oh...So does Kip."

Kip Spat out the remaing chips and started an arguement but then kept quiet. Lewin was just having a joke...I think.

Lewin and Kip liked Harry. He was cool with everything. They went down for breakfast.

Harry was suprised at how many people stared at him as they walked down.

There was a girl thaat smiled and Harry did the same back. Lewin caught the connection and whispered.

"Stupid girl , Janet." Lewin sneered. "She seems nice?" answered Harry. "Kip liked her to start off with then...She just never smiled at him...Weird girl."

"Oh...Who do you like?" asked Harry,Smiling. "Amy Ladens..." Replied Lewin, Kip looking up at the mention of her name.

"Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! See Kip Harry?" "Yeah!" Harry laughed, as Kip

was getting excited about Amy.

***

After Lunch, Lewin and Kip were sent to head master to read the mission breifing:

JAPANESE WHALING

THERE HAS BEEN AN INCCIDENT IN JAPAN WITH THE WHALES. A WHALE, THAT HAS BEEN MARKED WITH A RED DOT ON ITS BACK, YESTERDAY, BROKE FREE WITH LICENCE OF THE BRITISH PRESIDENT WHICH WAS STOLEN FROM THE BRITISH 3 WEEKS AGO ON THE 4TH OF APRIL 2007. THE WHALE SWALLOWED THE CASE WITH THE LICENCE STILL IN IT. IT HAS BEEN MARKED. THE BRITISH PRESIDENT CAN NOT BE PRESIDENT WITHOUT THAT LICENCE. JHON RODD, IS THE PRESIDENT

CURRENTLY WANTING HIS LICECNE BACK. FREDDING PAUL IS THE NEW PRESIDENT UNTIL JHON GETS HIS LICECNE BACK.

JHON WAS ABOUT TO REACH HIS 40TH YEAR BEING PRESIDENT WHEN THIS EVENT TOOK PLACE. HE NEEDS THE LICENCE BACK, BEFORE THE 14TH OF AUGUST AND IF NOT HE IS BANNED FROM PRESIDENT PLACE. OMNI WILL NOW REPRESENT TEENAGES UNDER SPY CASE.

ONMI'S PLACES:

THE TROPE THAT STOLE THE LICENCE IS CURRENTLY GOING TO SPOT THE WHALE ON THE 9TH OF APRIL. OMNI FOUND PLACES OF ONE OF THE TPOEMEN'S CHILDREN:

lEWIN = TROPEMAN'S SON, DANI

KIP= TROPEMEN'S SON, SONU

AMY= TROPEMEN'S DAUGHTER, WABUE

ONMI'S MISSION:

DANI,SONU AND WABUE HAVE BEEN KIDNAPPED ADN LEWIN,AMY AND KIP ARE GOING IN THERE PLACE. ON THE TRIP TO THE WHALES HUNT YOU MUST GET IN THERE AND STEAL THE LICENCE BEFORE THE JAPANESE DO. 2 MORE GADGETS WILL BE PLACED IN YOUR LUGGAGE AS YOU SET OUT: A MOBILE TO RING AND BE TELEPORTED BACK IMEDIENTLY. THE FOLLOWING GADhad GET IS VERY DANGEROUS: A GUN IN THE FORM OF A DIARY. YOU MUST ALL BE SAFE.

OMNI'S DATE OF DEPARTURE:

6TH OF APRIL. 9 PM.

As soon as lewin and kip had finished, they both said: COOL!

"This is dangerous. You must keep together. Kip, Lewin you both know Amy, don't you?" The headmaster spoke as Amy stepped in the room. "yeah" they drooled. "Sorry I am late." Amy smiled. "That's ok,Amy. Now you to go and pack and meet in here whilst I take Amy through with the mission. Kip give Amy your breifing sheet."

Kip handed Amy the sheet and tried to touch her smooth skin: FAILED!

***

They were all driving to the airport all silent. Ellan, the mission controler was driving. She was nice.

"Come on...You will be spending 2 whole months together...Better get chatting. Oh...Forgot to tell you. Dani,is very quiet and aristic. Sonue, is very loud and friendly he has 2 friends Bet and Got but Lewin,you won't need to worry. Wabue is in the middle and she has 1 best friend:Hellpou. Dani has no friends.

They all play together and as brother and siter do, Wabue and Sonu

really love eachthere."

Kip grinned. Amy ooked at him and smiled...Kip couldn't make out if it was an enthusiastic one or a just a sad one.

He soon wiped the smile off his face.

"Well...How are you feeling?" Amy asked Kip and Lewin. "Nervous."

replied Lewin, looking out the window. "Great!" Kip grinned.

"We are here!" said Ellen.

"Oh um...Are you coming?" Amy asked Ellen. "Yeah" just until you see your father and then I will go.

"There's our flight!" Amy said pointing to the departures.

She ran forward to get a better look and as she did her hip swerved to the side. Kip couldn't help it. He held his hand out to touch Amy's short shorts and he felt her skin! Amy turned amd grinned as she saw Kip's hand out!

"Who cares?" she said, still grinning.

***

They had had the best flight ever and were now getting off at Japan. The plane were put in groups of two. Lewin and Ellan sat together and Amy invited Kip next to her. Kip was more than overjoyed.

Amy and Kip were getting on well!

***

IT was time for Ellen to leave. They said goodbyes and good luckes and the three spoted their father for 2 months in the crowd. lewin had spotted him beacuse there had been picture that Ellen showed him on the plane.

"Hi Father!" said Lewin. "Sonny! How are all of you?"

"Good!" Amy replied. "Lets get home!" said the father,Suki.

In the car, Suki was talking:

"We will do whaling tommorrow. In 3 days. The Briish think that it will happen on the 9th of April. So have the best sleep tonight.

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  • Elementalwolf
    March 9, 2007

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    Pretty awsome

    Though you could have used more speech signs and phrases. But just to let you know that gadget on the plate food thingy was weird. Very weird. anyway it was pretty good and you should be proud of yourself. Well done but I think that maybe 41 EAST is a tinny bit better. But still be proud lil sis. Good try and maybe if Kip logs on it will be better than his. Probably. any way good effort. Good luck in my competition and all the best in life. See ya.
    L C Cary

    beginning: 5, language: 4, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.


  • Magma Globe
    March 9, 2007
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    its my story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!