Disappered (chapter 4)

The sky turned gray. The giant was on the ground dead. I looked around to see there was a cave. "Quick, in here!" I said grabbing Casy. We ran to the cave. There was hail. It hailed hard, for an hour. "Girl's it won't stop, so get on with the maze!" said the deep voice.

I looked at the hail. I knew I had to do it. I had to go out and run thourgh the hail, and finsh the maze. Even though this hail could kill you. "Casy we have to go out there," I said turning to Casy. Casy looked at me like I was crazy. I don't blame her.

"Are you crazy?!" she asked. "If we don't get out there and run then we will never live!" I said stritly. She looked at me this time like she was scared. "Ethier run for your life, or die here," I said. She looked at me puzzled. "Fine," I said facing my back to Casy. I began running. I felt the sharp hail fall down on me. I wanted to stop running, but I didn't I kept going. My skin ozing blood. I kept going. Casy was behind me, panting. I kept running. Running for my life.

Casy was bleeding more than me. She was dying! I grabbed her hand and dragged her, while running. I felt like my arm was going to fall off. My legs bleeding like crazy, ozing, and ozing more blood. I felt weak. I was losing too much blood. I ran faster. Yet that didn't seem like it was working.

I saw the exit to the maze. "I can reach it," I said lightly. I rn thorugh the door. It was dark. I set Casy down. Panting glad that I lived. "We made it!" Casy said. "Yeah," I said taking a breathe. Then right before my eyes Dani, my best friend poped in front of me. "DANI!" I yelled. I hugged her. But after my hug she disappered. "No!" I said looking in space.

Casy patted me on the back. "We have to keep moving," Casy said. "Your right," I said. I looked right ahead and there was darkness. Darkness everywhere.

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  • Stacey V
    March 17, 2007
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    Awesome


  • Pudding-zilla silver member
    March 8, 2007
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    wow

    ausome i think this was different write more really soon

    language: 5, plot: 4, ending: 5, dialog: 4, characters: 4.