Once upon a time, there was a little girl named Radafellia. Radafellia had a problem, a big problem. Everytime she sneezed, Radafellia would temporarily turn into a bi blob of peanutbutter!
One day, Radafellia cought a cold. She went down to the kitchen, to get some lunch, when suddenly, she felt the urge to sneeze. Radafellia tried so hard to fight it, but she just couldn't.
Radafellia sneezed.
But what she didn't know, was that it was the last time she would ever sneeze again.
Because just then, her little brother Rosie, came down stairs, to find a nice blob of delicious peanutbutter sitting on the table.
"Oh, yum!" he said, "Peanutbutter, my favorite! It's the perfect snack to eat just before my ballet lesson."
Then, just like that, Rosie ate Radafellia. He chewed her up and swollowed her.
When Rosie finished eating his peanutbutter and Radafellia sandwhich, Mother also came down to the kitchen.
"Rosie, have you seen your sister? I can't find her anywhere!" she asked. "Oh no, I haven't mother dear!" Rosie replied. "Well, I just hope she hasn't wondered off, I need to take you to your ballet lesson. Have you eaten your lunch yet?" Mother asked. "Oh yes I did, Mother, I did! I had a peanutbutter sandwhich!"
"A pea- a PEANUTBUTTER SANDWHICH?" she screamed. "Oh no, Rosie, we have to go to the hospital right away! COME ON!" She grabbed Rosie's hand and dashed out the door.
They reached, the hospital, to get Radafellia pumped out of her brother's stomach. But it was there, that they found out that Radafellia was gone. Because, Rosie had eaten her, there was no way to bring her back. Rosie felt horrible, and everyone was very sad.
Two weeks later, Mother had a new baby girl!
"Mother, since I'm a big brother now, can I choose, the name? I want to name her Radafellianumbertwo!" "Why Rosie, I think that is the most perfect name ever!"
And they all lived happily ever after with Radafellianumbertwo(who they liked even better) and never thought about Radafellia again!
THE END
Author notes
i came up with the name Radafellia (raa-daff-ell-ia) in a dream! hee hee hee
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lol poor Radafellia! this was awesome..very creative. 
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I thought it was a very funny story. haha Now im hungry for some peanut butter. I didnt except the ending though.
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HAHAHAHAHAHAHa
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As me and my gangsta sistas would say "This is off da chain!"
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It was very entertaing.
It was a funny story with a some what sad ending. i love the name Radafellianumbertwo. it is very you katie.
beginning: 4, language: 5, plot: 4, ending: 4, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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poor Radafellia!
such a sad, touching story! I am glad that I dont like peanut butter, because if i did, I would probably be afraid to ever eat it again.
beginning: 4, language: 3, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 4, characters: 4.
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Thas is so cute, but in a sad way!! It was awesom however!
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