The anniversary

When she woke up she went to the bathroom and drew a red heart on the mirror with her lipstick to remind him of the day. She knew he would see it when he got up for work.

As she headed down the stairs, her mind wandered back to the day they had first met. It was a year ago that they had their first dinner together.

She went downstairs to the kitchen and as she went to pour herself a cup of coffee, she noticed a small red box next to her cup and a note saying, “I remembered!”

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  • Awww. Kinda funny but soo cute!

  • Aw, this was a cute story.


  • Tiger-Lily
    January 31

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    Lmao, this made me laugh. Guys are so predictable, huh? Very cutesy, maybe, but humorous nonetheless.

    Well done on this.

    - HT


  • EtherealButterfly
    March 9, 2007
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    Hey, I entered the same contest. I like this story!

  • Jinxgirl
    March 8, 2007

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    cute idea... don't we all wish we had lovers who did, lol. but... this was only 85 words, you need to add another fifteen in somewhere.

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