(Love like winter...)
They embrace in the frigid air, amidst the swirling snowflakes and flawless ice sculptures. Here it's December every day...
They were destined their love, together before time had begun, would be still at its end...
They breath heavily in unison, exhaling vanilla lace in the form of frosty breath. They cling together,so near, yet so far away...
So hungry for love...
Reid bites her lip, and Rosslyn moans as her blood flows, seeps into his mouth... a taste of her inside him...
(It's in the blood...)
Por siempre... for always, we're together for always...
(Por siempre...)
Author notes
this is the poetic story option. this is based on the afi song "love like winter"... reid means red, and so does rosslyn.... like blood... lol
A contest entry
- Fandi Contest I - Options by Asfand.
225 points, ended July 10, 2007, 42 entries
Honorable mention
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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oooh.....interesting......i like it alot......its was short and very intriguing......
Por siempre....makes that soft, delicious sound.......beautiful........
Beautifully composed.....
CRITICISM
well......well.....i dont have much to criticize...
lose the parantheticals.....the ()....they disrupt the flow and make ur story choppy.........
other then that......this is flawless!!!
CHEERS and GUD LUK!!
PS. very ncie job!!
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Hey, exellent job
I love the words used, and the use of... spanish, is it?
Well done!
beginning: 4, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 2, characters: 5.
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I love the usage of spanish in this story.
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