the glass mirror

Ashley bought a mirror.
"This el have to do!" sighed Ashley putting it in her room. She looked at herself in the mirror. "Ay! I am so dirty, I should take a bath!" said Ashley leaving her room. The sun made the mirror glow. After a hot bath, Ashley looked at herself again. "Hello!" she said to herself. She admired herself. "I look so good, it has to be the mirror!" she exclaimed.
Ashley called her friend on the phone.
"Hello?" asked Gabriela, Ashley's friend, on the phone.
"Hello", said Ashley.
"Why did you call? I am on the pool!"
"Aren't you just too young to be swimming on a cold day?"
"Cold? I'm so hot today, I need to cool off".
"Whatever", moaned Ashley.
"Ok", sighed Gabriela, "Why did you call?"
"Oh! I am planning a party, wanna come?"
"Sure whatever, my mom's gonna get mad if I dont hang off".
"Oh! Ok, bye".
"Bye".
Ashley hang off. She looked at her mirror. "Suuussspppicciioous", she said. After 7:00 pm Ashley's friends came over. They watched TV, ate popcorn, played pillow fight, played with barbies, aate pizza then looked at the mirror. As they looked, they saw something weird (still not finished)

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  • Jinxgirl
    March 16, 2007
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    this is much more than 100 words, especially since you're not finished yet.


  • EtherealButterfly
    March 10, 2007
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    Are you going to finish this soon??? I'm curious as to what this story will turn out like.