Internet prowler

Locked in his own mind,1

he sat alone all day in a room2

getting familiar with his computer3

learning every thing there was to know about it.4

He open every window5

searched every tool bar6

he even learned how to log on to other computers7

and after a while hacking. 8

It was all to easy9

and a piece of cake10

Jason was a smart guy11

he read all kinds of books12

his IQ was phenomenal13

he was mad and yet sane all in one14

he started to write stories and poems 15

with his word play16

hacking into other computers17

he would find out all kinds of information18

about people brousing the net.19

AOL was a gate way for him20

he had numerous screen names21

he would sit and talk to all these people and get to know them22

through all these different screen names23

he kinda became obsessed24

with it.25

Jason was no freak26

but he was highly intelligent27

writing some poems all his favorite28

all poetry site29

he stumbled on to his poet30

she had no fire wall in her computer31

so she was an easy target for him to hack32

finally he worked up the nerve33

to comment on her stuff34

being all nice35

and caring and concerned36

she was surprised that someone took great interest in her and her words.37

Jason basically lived in her computer38

he learned every thing about her39

through her email's40

her instant messages41

her pictures42

and even her schedule.43

every time she would get on he would know44

since her computer was linked to his45

his computer. It would alert, 46

then he would come on and chat with her47

under different screen names trying to know her48

around Christmas she got a web cam49

so she could chat with friends from back home50

and talk with her males friends she likes51

Jason rigged her web cam so that when she used it52

the person trying to view her had a distorted image of her53

and he could see her very clearly54

he grew found of her55

and eventually fell in love with her from her words56

but she had no idea what was brewing in his mind.57

Jason started having all kinds of fantasies about her58

and although he talked to her it wasn't enough59

he sent her pics of all kinds of people trying to pass it off as who he was trying to be when he chatted with her.60

One day she wrote this poem61

about some movies star62

and he flipped out63

and thats when everything changed64

he started being rude to her65

telling her all kinds of mean things66

calling her names like whore and cunt67

but little did she know he was stalking her from inside of her own computer 68

he tried to make her jealous69

he knew she liked him70

yet some days he would be nice71

and other days he would be mean.72

Jason eventually moved to her town just to be near her,73

he moved in to her apartment complex74

and still stalked her through the Internet75

and so he could also keep an eye on her too76

Author notes

I got this idea about a man being so derranged that he stalked his victims thru the internet before meeting them and raping them

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  • ZorroTheFox silver member
    January 16, 2005
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    I have had a stalker once, but fortunately she found somebody she liked better and I never saw her again. It's too bad, she was kida cute and it was nice to know I was wanted so badly. If only she weren't such a nut case it might have worked out. >;o) nice story by the way

  • notreallypoetic
    July 22, 2004
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    creepy

    Uhh . . . . It was good and all except it seemed more like a poem or a short story than a screenplay.


  • tinydarkgoddess
    June 21, 2004
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    Creepy but Great Read!

    I can tell I won't be sleeping all too well tonight...yet I want to read the next part. It's creepy and just down right scary! I'm just PRAYING that this is totally and completely fictional. Great work and I'm just going to have to read more.

    Kamilah


  • Ghost of a Siren
    May 21, 2004
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    Ooo this is wonderful!!

  • AngelDeAmor
    May 20, 2004
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    I told ya babe. He's nutz.

  • Sector-Hunter
    May 20, 2004
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    This paints a very nasty picture great work on it you put a lot of thought into this I enjoyed reading it this world has some odd people in it and this shows them great work lots of love Robin...aka SH


  • May 12, 2004
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    freaky and potentially true, good description of a neurotic mind ... compelling story.

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