I remeber when we smiled and played
we talked at night and laughed during the day
We were the best of friends that could be
me with you and you with me
that day in second grade you marched up to me
you said my name is Brooke will you play with me
I smiled back and replied why not
we pretended we were horses so we'd run gallop and trot
and now two years later i sit here writing this
remebering how a best friend was my wish.
A contest entry
- If You Know Me by Taylor Renee.
175 points, ended July 12, 2007, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
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A nice, short piece. It has a certain pull to it, a certain flow that makes its shortness just right for it. Good job and good luck in the contest.
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omg you know i love this i am sooo glad you entered it!!! its great, and you know that your an awesomne writer.
great poem, as always.
good luck and thanks again
xoxo lots of love!!!
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This makes me remember something that I don't have now.
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Like I said on the other one. Awesome. Great Job.
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wow i loved this poem!!!! ru still friends with her? whhat happened?
<3
Tay -
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YA
ya i just wanted to write this from the point of view that we werent
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