Something took a part of me,
when I let you go and watched you leave.
I thought you and I were ment to be.
I flashback to all the times we shared,
the ciggerette in my hand burns out,
tears falling down,
I think of you.
If you fall,
I will catch you,
I'll be right here,
time after time.
I lie in my bedroom,
I cant sleep, I roll over,
and your not there.
If you're lost in love,
dont know what to do,
I will be waiting,
time after time.
Something took a part of me,
when I let you go and watched you leave.
I want you to know,
I'll always love you,
time after time.
Please tell me what you think
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this seems like you could sing it as a song!!! I hope you do!!
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haha.thanks.
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this is deep donna. but it has good structure. i love you
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I liked it
It really had a good pace and conveyed your meaning easily. Fantastic job.
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Yeah I kinda know the feeling, I lost someone too, sad really, but there was nothing I could do about it. Anyways love the poem
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nice
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Thank you so much, its nice to know that someone can relate to this. Finally.lol. I usually dont smoke unless I am really upset or stressed, and that night, it seemed as if everything reminded me of him. I have no contact with him anymore, he had to leave unwillingly should i say, and I miss him, and am hoping that he will get back on here and know that I will be waiting and that I will always love him. Thanks for the comment.
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no prob and that sucks
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