A content girl put down her book which said the words 'Diary'. Just completed her dialy writing she put it under a large matriess and she smiled. She then took out a notebook where she began to write:1
She is in love. 2
She pictures him and won't let him go.'3
Suddenly a knock on the door was heard, "Sweety?" She entered the room, "Now, whats this? What are you writing?" She grabbed the book and read it, the girl tried to grab it away. "What are you writing this for?" She began to yell.4
"Nothing. It's a poem."5
"You feel this stuff? I'll kill this boy. Who is it?"6
"Nobody. That's how i want to feel."7
"Want to feel?" She grew more angry, "How's about we show this to your pa. Come!"8
They walked into a room where an angry looking man sat smoking a pipe. 9
"Angus. This girl of your has been having not good feelings." 10
Angus was handed the notebook. He read it and looked very angry, "Melody. Is this yours?"11
"Yes. But-"12
"No buts." He watched Melody closely, "Mary, go get my whip."13
"No!" Melody shouted. She began to cry for she imagined the feeling of a whipped bottom. "It means nothing."14
"Alright now Algus. Here it is." She handed him the whip. She watched happily.15
Melody's eyes grew hard, scaredom struck her.16
--to be finished later.17
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ooooh finish I like these kinds of stories...
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PLEASE finish it! I really want to read it!
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ahh!! i want to know what happens! this has a great beginning to it... lots of emotions, the dialouge is terrific, it really sets the stage for what's going on, and what's going to happen later on. i hope you do keep writing this out, becuase i'll be waiting for the rest!
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Your story had me wanting to read more but it is incomplete so I am just left hanging wondering what will happen next.You should really finish this story.
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