The Ghastly Ogre!

Deep in the dungeons of McAllister's castle 1

there lived and ogre of despicable attraction.2

Amongst the dead foul creatures of the night the 3

ogre creep ed with utter delight.4

Looking for disgusting morsels to eat.5

Like maggots from the carcass of decaying meat.6

The ogre has bulging eyes dripping with slime.7

Vulgar varicose veins imprinted atop his hairless mind.8

His nose is distorted and full of warts with a mouth of 9

jagged teeth and decaying moldy tartar.10

See him salivating over his unfortunate martyr.11

His tongue wagging with protruding green fingers and razor12

sharp nails ravishing his victim.13

Devouring blood and guts as he viciously consumes him.14

He snorts the repulsive essence emanating from fermented flesh.15

Dismembering every limb as he cleans the bones with eagerness.16

Imagine the backdrop of a murky dilapidated estate.17

Encompassed by fog and swarming vultures starving to eat.18

Creatures of the night howling under a florescent moon.19

Horrid things like ghosts goblin and disfigured goons.20

The most ghastly by far is the ogre who is nine feet tall 21

with a voice that roars like thunder.22

Who after feasting off his quarry continues to roam and wonder.23

Among the living dead hunting for tasty victuals in the night.24

Awaiting the next fallen victim as a bloody sacrifice.25

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  • Diamond
    October 8, 2004
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    Sickenly Disgusting Absolutely Brilliant Writ

    GROSS! DISGUSTING to the hilt! Absolutely dispicable! I loved every sickening, repulsive, disfigring, smelly line. You sure know how to tell a disgusting story and provide the most gruesome images to go along with it. This was pretty well written. You should be writing for Stephen Speilberg. He would love you I'm certain of that. Absolutey horrid yet wonderfully written. You talent never ceases to amaze me. Wonderful my sweet prince.
    Edited on Oct 08, 8:43 p.m. because ''.


  • angelica
    May 10, 2004
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    Great story Darell, I love the gruesome tales..makes my hair stand on end, but love it my friend~Love~Joan~


  • May 7, 2004
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    It's so disgusting it's beautiful.